|Reviews for The Love Story of Naruto and Sakura|
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/18
I have read you chapters so far and in the beginning it was kind of realistic but as you have progressed in your writing it seams that the characters are becoming less and less like the ones in the anime and manga. For example Sakura is not as weak both emotioaly and phisicaly as you portray her to be. She would not give in to Naruto so easily as to be olmost controlled by Naruto is not as cruel harted and violent as as you seem to sugest. He would never get as angry with Sakura as many times and as bad as he has in your writing expecily since he has faced worse delemas and not as gotten so violent as to seem a new person. Hinata would not fall for Kiba because she is so in love with Naruto.I know that this is your interpritation of the story and not the real thing, so I know that I can not expect it to be completly accurate, but it is begging ti seem a little to far fetched.
| ashley chapter 4 . 2/14
| Zen chapter 21 . 1/19
I love this story. It was such a amazing story.
| liam d chapter 4 . 1/2
this was awesome your quite an experienced writer ever feel like becoming a writer it was like a episode of naruto with love entwined into it :D thanks for this i dont really read this much but this gets me exited ahhahahh but in the proper anime i think naruto and hinata have more of a chance though but i like this !
| ktron chapter 21 . 12/24/2013
I loved the ending crying on the inside way to go i will never forget this story
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/11/2013
Awsome job it's like I am watching a movie
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/10/2013
Didn't kakashi get pierced by a ton of blades over And over again though.
| BigNate001 chapter 15 . 12/10/2013
Are you seriously bringing Sasuke into this? That is so dumb. I swear if he does something like rape Sakura or kill the baby I'm going to be fucking pissed off!
| jkninja chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
now we re talking
| jkninja chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
| rulene chapter 14 . 11/21/2013
Omg that part where naruto is having a daddy molment its as funny as he'll lol
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
You spelled kunkoro wrong it's not kunkoro
It is kunkuro
And p.s I luv your fanfic :3 ._.
| NaruHina Fan chapter 3 . 10/30/2013
I know this is a love story and all but it would have been more proper if Naruto had gotten Hinata to help Sakura with the shower instead of having undressed her, a team mate, himself. It seems highly inappropriate for a ninja, let alone someone as morally inclined as Naruto, to do something like that.
| amber chapter 21 . 10/28/2013
OMG I LOVED THIS PLEASE BE A STROY CONTINUED FROM THIS I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THEM IN THE FUTURE! Really I loved it I absolutely loved it! amazing I can only say great things about it! it was very descriptive and I could easily picture it in my mind! I REALLY REALLY DID LOVE IT PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER ONE!
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/26/2013
Please write a sequel and let naruto and sakura master the rasengan and rasengan shuriken. With these fanfictions you can gets some cash so please with all your favorite toppings on top make a sequel