Reviews for SelfConclusion
vamp.ladybug chapter 6 . 9/3/2009
Edward is perfect and I call dibs on shooting Jake's ass I'll let you pick the round :)
Twylah chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
His family is ridiculous and selfish and he shouldn't have to apologize. That they make everything about them is the truest thing he could have said.
K-cullen13 chapter 24 . 8/21/2009
this story was really really good, i loved it :)
LR51 chapter 24 . 8/21/2009
The best proposal ever!
LR51 chapter 23 . 8/21/2009
Never expected this twist - Bella saying she would jump too! Tears.
LR51 chapter 19 . 8/21/2009
Bella so deserves this vacation - worry free!
LR51 chapter 10 . 8/20/2009
Edward seems to be overboard. Maybe there is more to his issues than what has been revealed so far. He seems to be jealous and unsure of his future but that is certainly not enough to think suicide! (Really nothing is though)
LR51 chapter 8 . 8/20/2009
I hope Bella is not stupid and goes back to Jake. If she leaves Edward's home Jake won't take no for an answer. The suspense! I love Edward!
LR51 chapter 7 . 8/20/2009
Edward is so caring, gentle, and protective. Poor Bella, this Edward is just what she needs.
LR51 chapter 6 . 8/20/2009
I am enjoying the story. It is very different from what I have been reading. Thank you!
chickwithhazeleyes chapter 24 . 8/18/2009
all i can say is thank you. i loved every twist and turn of this story, from beginning to end. amazing!
Cvanessa chapter 24 . 7/29/2009
Beautiful story.
gcgonc chapter 24 . 7/12/2009
omg! hey!

i'm so sorry i stopped reviewing some chapters ago, i just really badly wanted to catch up, i felt like i was missing something important and just couldn't stop... but i truly can't thank u enough for writing such an amazing story, it made me laugh, cry, and pretty much scream all over the place LOL!

gosh, what can i say... i loved the whole vacation, very hot sexy scenes between Edward and Bell, it was sweet the first time, and how it came to be the first time, awesome ring and the whole dinner and all, i just... i mean it was just so perfect... the shower, well i guess we all have our fantasies about Edward in the shower m, amazing pic xD

ok, i saw the Billy thing coming, although i sure wasn't prepare to the timing nor the consequences of such dreadful thing... i mean i think Bella reacted like a normal person would, i mean Billy WAS part of who she was and what she had become, his death was bound to make her "forgive" Jacob, in some way... even if it wasn't in the way he would want... but MY GOD was i shocked about Edward's reaction, not that i don't understand it, i mean he wasn't really looking forward to "going back to the real life" and that letter really brought him back in one big jump, smashing down on him, and besides like "accepting" he was a failure to have all his inner demons stir with one big aspect of his life (bringing back all the feelings of being wrong and not good enough), and to top that see the girl he loves, and feels like he isn't good enough, in the arms of her atacker, ex lover, ex friend, was like the last drop that spilled the glass...

i can't even begin to describe when i thought they were too late, i mean i crash down just as Bella had... thankfully he hadn't and Bella made her realize that he wasn't in this alone, he was holding the keys to 2 different life's, his own and Bella's, not that it wouldn't kill his family, but their connection goes deeper and well 1 life holds the other...

just... BRAVO! congrats, love ur story, can't wait 2 read the other! real success for u!

gcgonc chapter 11 . 7/9/2009
hey! me again...

hahaha ok, so things have been foing smoothly for both of them, i'm glad, they need some time to take things slowly and at the same time be themselves and heal..

glad to see Edward calling Esme, i mean she must have been dying not knowing how her son was and why the separations, etc.. i'm glad he's slowly healing, as Bella is, even if it's completely different, it's amazing xD

the surprise was nice heheh i thought he was going to have some other favorite, but it was perfect.. and Alice was nice to Bella so i guess she's beginning to trust her... m i hope so, i like them when they'r best friends heheh xD

the "semi-sex" scene, was good, i feel the same way, they just couldn't jump right into the sex, not as Bella is right now, i don't think any of them are rushing, but u do know that when they do have sex the expectations are going to be high, right? LOL! just saying hehehe

well, can't wait to see what happens at the Cullens xD

gcgonc chapter 10 . 7/8/2009
ok.. i'll have a break... haven't slept all nite xD

wow! okk glad to know that Bella and Edward had a nice time and spent and shared even more about themselves with each other, like Edward said, understanding a little more of where they've been and how they've become what they are...

ooh yay! the Cullens are here hehe xD wow, ok unexpected... i mean the scene, being so awkward and unhappy and feisty, and many may disagree but i like the fact that Edward was just so full that he just about told everyone what was wrong, i mean it was eating him alive and it was something that had to happen, too long he's been keeping that inside... i AM sorry that all the Cullens felt like crap after that, not expecting that from Edward, but that just gives us a reason to see how even though u may think u know someone, u really have no idea what happens in the mind of another person, their own personal hell, especially when everything is woking out good for u...

wow! bout the kiss, never thought that it could remind Bella of something awful... but that proves Edward right, that she's not ready for sex or anything to intense, thank god he thinks right... but then again, hopefully this won't make Bella have second thoughts or anything, 'cause i mean it's not his fault (or i don't think so, dunno)... oh well i guess i'll have to see...

and apparently we'll get to see get togethers with the Cullens, meeting Bella and all, so i guess summer isn¡t a total screw up... m, wonder what will happen... and if other characters will be involved...

well can't wait to read more... but later... gotta sleep... hehehe xD

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