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gcgonc chapter 6 . 7/8/2009
m... **sighs** yeah me again...

if i keep this up, i'm not gonna finish quick enough! LOL!

well fist of, i think somehow this story hits close to home, not precisely the whole suicidal thing, but i undestand what Edward went through at least.. and yet just by having Bella with him, all of that just seemed to go to another level, not nearly as important as she is... thank god he saw everything clear, the repercutions of his actions...

ok, so Bella feels at home in Edward's arms alone and not his house! hehehe u gotta admit that's kind of funny... and she feels like an intruder when he has showed nothing but true interest in her, wanting nothing in return, just to have some kind of place in her life, like he said, in any shape, form or whatever... and again we go with the feelings the rescuer feels for whom he/she rescue, like i said in my other review, Edward and Bella are both, recuer n the one that needs to be rescue... undeniable bondage here...

thank god Edward got to Bella, that woudl've been a really nasty pizza for them to eat LOL! he's gonna push her into being comfortable... how cute!

And people have the audacity to ask me why i love Edward so much, HERE'S WHY PEOPLE! hahaha!

n i'll continue xD

gcgonc chapter 5 . 7/8/2009
m no need for introduction.. LOL

ok, so i got some things wrong... she does trust him, m, i knew she felt something strong, 'cause well he gave her waht she needed WHEN she needed it, like perfect timing worst circumstances... of course it's totally understandable to develop a strong bond with the person that saves u, and that's exactly what they did for each other... but i think u're also trying to prove that the connection this 2 (and all the Cullens, Hales) have are undeniable and beyond any physical... spiritual? maybe, probably... m.. would u even say they'r MEANT to be together? maybe, again probably... which is where "FATE" would be involved... were they not in a bad place, they would've never met, yeah, crappy life, but leading them to a place of healing, to a place where thhey could finally find themselves, and ultimately save each other, giving into the ultimate happiness... no longer would they feel left out, no longer betrayed by others (or that's what i think 'cause people that go through that i don't think would ever hurt another someone, especially when that someone has gone to the same or worst pain, like Bella said, pain is pain, no matter what proportion or how bad they are, they still consume the person)...

ok... i'm gonna read some more xD

gcgonc chapter 4 . 7/8/2009

ok i feel awful... i normally make like REALLY long reviews (ask any other author i've read)... but since this is a story that i have something to keep reading i just get myself excited and impatient to go to the next chapter and see what happens (which is a good thing for u 'cause i'm hooked xD)...

anyway, ok i see how Edward feels like an idiot having stupid reasons for what he had, but like i've heard somewhere (probably a song) we see the faces but we don't know what their hearts have hidden.. it's like so different from each other, what for u may seem stupid for me it could be the end of the world, MY world, and it's difficult to see this, unless presented with an opportunity like Edward, seeing how fucked up Bella is, and that compared to her he has everything and can just stop and start over...

cool to see Bella open up, though i don't see like she "completely" trusts Edward, but she just needed someone so she could scream all of her problems at, and seeing that he was her knight in shinning armor, well he has to take what she's giving... which of course i hope lead to her into giving him everything bout her, trust, love,etc...

sometimes i wonder which is worst, depression about something stupid or about situation in the real life... like at what Edward gets depressed about, and what get Bella... both psycological, but which one could be worst... m.. dunno...

ok, bout to read the next xD

gcgonc chapter 3 . 7/8/2009
ok... me again...

well Edward is kind of sad, i mean like nothing is worth a single thing, and how trapped he feels in himself... even though no one seems to see any problem, he just feels off, and to make matters worst he feels like he doesn't really know love, that love has evaded him like a plague, and that must be lonely... but i guess it made sense that his instincs went into overdrive when he saw someone has to be going to the same thing as he is 'cause well she's doing what he went to do in the first place, so it's, like he said, a last chance to see if it really is the only option...

m curious 2 see how this turns out... well gotta keep reading xD

gcgonc chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
hey there! ok so me again!

hehehe wow! great chapter... i mean Bella has a crappy life and to top that her only reason to be, her home, her safety net has totally turned, not really against her, but more like away from her... he turned into a predator, nothing more useful than an animal... for god sake, he raped her... well ok i dunno all the story.. but god! it's not that i hate Jake, it's just nice to see something else, another side to the goody goody type...

well, can't wait.. gonna keep reading.. keep it up! amazing!

gcgonc chapter 1 . 7/7/2009

wow! ok, i never usually give a review on the 1st chap or prologue, 'cause i mean it's not much to work with... but OH MY GOD! that was an awesome way to attract ur audience! just WOW! can't wait 2 keep reading xD

thegreengosgirl chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
Jacob was delusional!
thegreengosgirl chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Good prologue
I'm-a-brunette chapter 19 . 6/23/2009
First of all, I love the story! It's great, it really is!

Secondly, I wanted to correct you about something. I have been to Dunns River Falls a total of three times, and it is a strenuous activity; you don't just climb the falls to take pictures, you go THROUGH the cascading water and climb the falls.

Keep posting, and thank you for a great story...

I want to keep reading, so I'll stop writing now!
speace2 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Great depressing prologue. Love it!
L'amante di Destino chapter 24 . 6/22/2009
Awesome story!
anita414 chapter 9 . 6/20/2009
Aw... such a great story. It's different from others i've read, but in a good way! I'm loving it so far, keep up the great work.
KrittleTwilighted chapter 24 . 5/28/2009
Aww..such a sweet story!
DazzlexMe chapter 24 . 5/28/2009
Amazing Job!
DazzlexMe chapter 7 . 5/27/2009
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