|Reviews for Unrequited|
| Captain Arbitrary chapter 3 . 1/12/2012
That was a very logical explanation for Aerith's revival. It gets pretty cliche after a while when people write that the Planet "allowed" her to come back, there's gotta be more to it than that. But this is getting really good! I also love Clerith and Vintif so I'm looking forward to seeing those two couples develop. :)
| MetroDyne chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
I have conflicting feelings about this chapter. I absolutely LOVE your writing style i haven't the foggiest why, but i do...
HOWEVER, i think it might have been better to bring Aerith back in a latter chapter so it wouldn't feel rushed.
Regardless, UPDATE SOON!
| MetroDyne chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
This story is looking good! Abit shorter than i like my chapters, but something about your writing style hooks me. The only complaint i have is the beginning when it was like attack of the periods.
I don't know too much about grammer (i hated english), but they seemed out of place... hm... Oh well. Hope you keep this story going!