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| bhoney chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Wow, I don't know why no one reviewed this, it was really beautiful. I actually had tears in my eyes by the end.
I loved this line: “To tell you that not all hope is lost.” Loved that you brought back Layla, I always liked her. So glad she lived. And Layla reminding Dean that his prayers for her really did change things? Phenomenal. Very powerful.
But this was my absolute favorite part, because it is so true, and a good reminder to all of us: “Because I realized Roy didn’t have the last word, God did.” Wow. Just...wow.
Really lovely, inspiring story. Well done! I'm favoriting this!