Reviews for The Day Of Christmas
Guest chapter 3 . 12/19/2014
I liked it alot! a few grammatical errors but still great! I wish you would finish it though...
LuciferIX chapter 3 . 5/20/2008
Well as I promised here's the review. I'm not completely used to reading about the Pokemon so much like humans but so far it has been a nice read. The most prevalent mistakes that I noticed as I was reading was the multitude of small grammatical errors. Other than that there really isn't anything else that I could really see.

A large amount of shippings in this story, though two seem to be featured more than the others. And the two featured ones are carrying on with the traditions of Christmas.

So far so good with this story. I hope to see the next chapter up soon. Keep the updates coming!