Reviews for Unwelcomed Guests
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Why did u stop writing no leave me alone
Montyyx chapter 7 . 3/24/2010
EmptySequence chapter 7 . 6/7/2009
aw man i love this storyy! please update! :)
Dread Barb chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Oh good lord. I know that I, an underground person far away from the mediocrities of the mainstream, shouldn't be here, telling you how much of a fool you are for loving Twilight and incorporating an overrated band's songs in this story; nevertheless, I have to lay this down.

You should not be proud of this story at all. It's just unoriginal; a travesty like Stephenie Meyers. Why reference a song? Worse yet, why the lyrics? I myself have thought of making a songfic, "Unleashed," By Front Line Assembly, but then I remember that it would be pathetic and mediocre. And that song has much more meaning that your "My Immortal."
XombiesYum chapter 6 . 5/10/2009
aw c'mon! y did u have to stop there!
xXxlizardxXx chapter 6 . 4/17/2009
This is a good story! Ouch! charlie will have broken his hand! please keep writing!


xx.FrequentlyDazzled.xx chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
NO! CLIFFIE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i love this fic! xoxo

can't wait for the next chapter,

- .xx
LovingEdward4ever95 chapter 6 . 12/12/2008
I didn't like this one, it's way too confusing.
Kiren-D chapter 6 . 11/3/2008
Charlie broke his hand didn't he? lol Hot Kiss bella. So have you decided if this is Ra/Be fic or a E/B foc yet?
Kiren-D chapter 4 . 11/3/2008
hehehe get lost Jacob. lol.
Kiren-D chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
...SON OF A *&(%)*(&&%$(*&%$W&! LoL. o:)
Kiren-D chapter 2 . 11/3/2008
(AN: Cliffy! O who could it be? you will never guess MWAHAHAHA!(you really wont im not kidding)

LMAO you sounded like my best friend right there.
Kiren-D chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
AWESOME choice of who was it?...not like your gonna tell me lol.
flytoast chapter 6 . 11/3/2008

Er, I can't remember if this is a Review or Private Message.


I, er, haven't read it, I really cannot be bothered.

Sounds good from all the reviews though.

Sure sure.

So seeing as everyone's like:


I will say it is prehaps the worst prose I have ever read(pretend I've read it)I have read a lot of awful stories and this out-awfuls them all.


Do not take that seriously.

It's Charlotte...

who is bored...

and browsing

Geason chapter 6 . 10/15/2008
hahahaha poor charlie rofl i hope his hand is ok roflmao
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