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iryna chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Beautiful! I love it :D
megarock1018 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
ok...

wheres the story?

i can see the intent there

but no content ill be waiting for the story k?

hope its a good one!
ViktorMayrin chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
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There are so few good stories in the Tactics sections in general.

Keep it up!
Min the Noodle chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Hah, short and sweet. The shortness, I think, would be my biggest complaint; I wanted to read more!

You have a neat idea going here. I like the way you tied Marche directly to Ivalice- the snowy Ivalice- and the way he IS the way home. The conciseness kept most of the spelling/grammar errors out (save for "horse" versus "hoarse") and it was quite easy to read. Nice job, and I absolutely loved the ending. (The blue rose side mission was seriously one of my favorite parts of the game. I'm not even kidding. _;; )

Sweet. I look forward to seeing more from you. ;)

-Min

(A quick question- which LJ Community would this be?)