|Reviews for you are my homecoming|
| iryna chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Beautiful! I love it :D
| megarock1018 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
wheres the story?
i can see the intent there
but no content ill be waiting for the story k?
hope its a good one!
| ViktorMayrin chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
There are so few good stories in the Tactics sections in general.
Keep it up!
| Min the Noodle chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Hah, short and sweet. The shortness, I think, would be my biggest complaint; I wanted to read more!
You have a neat idea going here. I like the way you tied Marche directly to Ivalice- the snowy Ivalice- and the way he IS the way home. The conciseness kept most of the spelling/grammar errors out (save for "horse" versus "hoarse") and it was quite easy to read. Nice job, and I absolutely loved the ending. (The blue rose side mission was seriously one of my favorite parts of the game. I'm not even kidding. _;; )
Sweet. I look forward to seeing more from you. ;)
(A quick question- which LJ Community would this be?)