Reviews for Albus Potter And the Year of The Badger |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your story you decide how Neville behaves. But in my opinion his a fine balance between professional and relaxed. Don’t think Neville would become strict and reserved towards students so your profile is in my opinion spot on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I have read HUNDREDS of HP fanfics and this I among the tops. I thought the Maldonado were behind the Dark professor’s deeds to give the three the adventure the golden trio had all staged as well as help hufflepuff win at quidditch. Draco hints at this connection but it is not clear how deep the scheme went. But the when the leprechaun comes Albus would have to choose turning in Scorpius’s family or suffer the consequences. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just loved the speech to the Slytherins. Also really enjoying the story. |
![]() ![]() Rose is a gryffindor! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's really hypocritical of Ron who stayed behind for Harry. Oh wow I love your story so much. I would love to see this as the sequel instead of the Cursed Child as a movie you know |
![]() ![]() ![]() Albus was the Potions man, Rose was the queen of Transfiguration, and Scorpius caused Rose to mime gagging more than once when he pointed out that he was the "Charming" one. My favourite lines so far. Ha ha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah woah what what just happened i am confused |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love our Trio so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the characterisation of the professors so far. Harry and Al interaction was so satisfying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well we all now know that Al has leadership skills. Wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I am so proud to be a Hufflepuff |
![]() ![]() "Half-breed" as said by Umbridge is not polite. It is used by JKR to highlight Umbridge's prejudices, lack of respect and intolerance. You should not be using it as if it is an accepted term. "Prefaced" means preceded by, usually as an introduction. You could do with a beta for whom English is their first language. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My characters talk in my hood. It just flows i completely understand. I am so glad you made the Badger Trio seriously i am so sick of reading Albie and Scorp in Slytherin or in Griffindor Rose ends up in another house most of the time seperated from these 2. I just don't see completely Slytherin and Griffindor inclined traits in these 3 . Harry has more of them than these 3 in my mind at least |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Teddy he is such good brother. James will soon warm up i know it. He is just being a lil stubborn. I love how Molly Weasley is the top even above Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am a Hufflepuff you? |