|Reviews for Crucio|
| Elaine's Spike chapter 25 . 1/13
looking forward to the next instalment
| libro5678 chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
love the poem from the chapter names!
| Luzith chapter 25 . 11/17/2013
Great job! very well written!
| missgsmith51 chapter 21 . 11/9/2013
I feel sorry for Harry in these instances, because protector or no, Snape is bloody brutal to Harry, making him feel selfish and unreasonable for wanting to hang onto the last link to his parents, one of the few people who'd made him feel wanted.
Snape could talk Harry through this and get him to where he needs to be emotionally and mentally to let go of Black and get things right again. Harry isn't stupid, just bereft and lost. Snape is brutal here.
| missgsmith51 chapter 6 . 11/9/2013
I agree with your note to Anne. Harry wasn't trying to be selfish and arrogant.
So many of what Snape often calls Harry's selfish stunts happen because Harry lacks information. The adults all want to "protect" him from knowing too much, because they believe he is too young for so much responsibility. In doing so, they fail to give him the very information that would enable him to trust them and do as they ask. If Harry had known HOW Voldy might use him and why he was dreaming I'm tell corridor, he would have known to mistrust those visions. That he did not was the fault of the adults.
Harry has never been "just a kid." He has always relied on himself, because he had to. Knowing the "rules" about the prophecy spheres would have told him immediately that Sirius would not be useful in getting the prophecy. Duh! The adults blew it again.
| The arithmancer chapter 25 . 8/15/2013
I found the first half really hard and was going to give up until I checked the last chapter and Sirius was alive. The ideas and way that you have developed them are fascinating, combining scientific theory with the magical world. Glad I didn't give up
| sylvelle chapter 25 . 8/9/2013
Happy I stuck around to finish the story; very good.
| Noxy the Proxy chapter 2 . 8/7/2013
| sylvelle chapter 16 . 8/7/2013
You killed him! Why can't anybody just kill SNAPE
| sylvelle chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
I think I hate it.. but I'm not sure. I'm still reading, hoping something good comes out.
| Beside Moonlight chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Dun... Dun... DUN!
| 29knbv chapter 18 . 8/2/2013
This is so freaky and i love it
| Kathy J chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
I loved this whole thing! I just wanted to thank you for writing all of this. I just finished this chapter and are onto the next one! Very nice chapter by the way. I really like reading about Snape's thoughts and seeing how he thinks and feels. Thank you so much again for writing this!
| Ms. Moonshoes Potter chapter 12 . 3/26/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY! ( but... fyi I am probably gonna have nightmares about naked Snape... that will haunt me.)
| elijahlover chapter 25 . 12/30/2012
I love it its so amazing u literally had me laughing and crying I bawled my eyes out when I thought u killed off Sirius xxxx