Reviews for Pepsi
Argent-Perekin chapter 6 . 12/20/2009
LOL Quite funny, and exactly how I'd expect Storm Shadow to act if he ever became good. I like the way he's talking to the plant about life. It kind of reminds you of how Storm Shadow's life hasn't been easy, either.
zenbon zakura chapter 6 . 9/23/2009
poor plant...

lol
Psychotic Pyro Fairy chapter 6 . 9/23/2008
haha, loved it. Though I must ask, why didn't they just use Storm Shadow's real name in the introductions? I would think it would make things a tad less difficult. Maybe... Eh, what do I know. So, it was great! Can't wait for more! ;D
TSAStormShadow chapter 6 . 9/9/2008
Patiently awaiting your next chapter. I’m enjoying StormShadow being not so in control.
Yaruhi chapter 6 . 9/3/2008
Aw! Poor plant!

Anyway, good job! I thought it was really great.

Update soon.

Yaruhi
Asterisk78 chapter 6 . 9/3/2008
Isn't Ayame supposed to recognize him?

Asterisk*
Rai Science chapter 5 . 9/2/2008
this is an awesome story please update i lovfe this! poor stormshadow!
Yaruhi chapter 5 . 8/8/2008
The plot thickens indeed!

Hurry and update;

I can't wait to see

where this is going.

Nice job!

Yaruhi
Asterisk78 chapter 5 . 7/28/2008
I always loved this chapter...but what are you going to do for A? I mean, we haven't yet introduced her, and it's going to be a little odd...

But it's nothing you can't handle, unlike unnecessary capitalization. Please stop. It's a habit. It's going to become an addiction - it'll eat you alive... (and I exaggerate only slightly)

Penelope
little miss sexy thang chapter 4 . 7/8/2008
hurry up chapter 5!der der der...lol
Asterisk78 chapter 4 . 7/6/2008
Very cute. My one suggestion would involve trying to cut out the fragments. Try using dashes, semicolons or colons instead.

But I do love how Storm Shadow foils himself with his own pride. It's very fitting. And btw, you need to work more on the Phillip one. I thought you had more on that.

Asterisk*
Psychotic Pyro Fairy chapter 4 . 7/5/2008
Ha ha! Loved it! Makes me laugh! Te-he.

I don't understand why Storm Shadow hates pop-tarts so much. I mean, they're a bit over-rated, but they're not that bad!

Keep up the good work!

THE Psychotic Pyro Fairy
gunslinger01 chapter 3 . 5/30/2008
nice plot event - keep the craziness going
Asterisk78 chapter 3 . 5/29/2008
Where did the cave-in happen before? I don't remember that...

Anyway, I love the part with the eating dead people. Even though I've read this several times, it always makes me laugh. Every. Single. Time.

Anyway, one note: it's it is. Its Possessive form of it.

There were at least two of those that I saw.

Asterisk*
Yaruhi chapter 2 . 5/27/2008
I like it. And I don't even know anything about these characters. Oh well.

I thought it was really good.

Nothing jumped out at me as to

mistakes, so... Keep up the good work.

Yaruhi
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