Reviews for Wounds
mari6s chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Really nice, subtle. Great fic!
aikakone chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
I like! Thank you!
Sulphurya chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
This was painfully beautiful.

I love Kara and Leoben and this fic was really true to their characters.

"She steps back. Leoben stares at her, unable to understand. He was making sure Kara was not hurt, like she told him to. Perhaps he was a little sloppy. Perhaps he was distracted. But Helo's also been injured and she's not glaring at must he bear the brunt of her anger?"

My favorite part. Absolutely perfect!

You need to write more of this!
SkaraBrae chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Oh, I hope this isn't the last one of these that you write! I love your characterizations and you capture Kara's uncertainty so perfectly.

I love this...
taramis chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Very nice... I love how you show Kara's 'concern' for Leoben. Very much in character!

rose griffes chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I've enjoyed all three of these-they tie together well, stand alone well, too. I love all the unspoken parts of their interactions.
riane chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Beautifully written. Crisp, clear. I ache for Leoben and even poor, frustrated Kara.

“I'm not watching over you, you hear me? I'm not. You've got to do this next time. Or ask your toaster buddies for help.”

oh! Such denial :)
lunar47 chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
ooh I loved this. I think I loved Kara's anger most of all and Leoben's devotion to her, even in pain.