Reviews for First Steps
mackiechandler chapter 13 . 2/8
This is both interesting and well written. Like Sebastian. Want to smack Ron around. Scared of Dumbles.

Keep writing.
celticwitch77 chapter 13 . 1/29
Excellent story. I just wish it was completed.
Scarlet Lupin chapter 13 . 12/1/2016
This is awesome I love this story I can't wait for an update. I am definitely looking forwards to some more Harry and Viktor interaction and I'm looking forwards to Harry meeting Fluer. Will Harry still be participating in the tournament? What about Hermione and Ron will they resolve their friendship with Harry? Oh my god just so many questions please update again soon
PS- I see you stuck with Blaise Zambini being a girl, that totally threw me for a loop when I first read that I thought it was a typo then I was confused but hey what is fan fiction if not our playground to take liberties with an authors work. keep up the amazing work ;)
-SL xxxx
MarilynT chapter 13 . 10/29/2016
Well - this is an interesting story. I hope you pick it back up. I would like to see where you are going with this.
SofiaDragon chapter 8 . 8/25/2016
Aside from confusing "wander" and "wondersomething that had me flipped around a few timesthis story is awesome.
Nights Silhouette chapter 13 . 7/2/2016
A great story to date. Would be awesome too see more of it.
Me chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
Nudge nudge poke update?
Me chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
Still peeking still poking still hoping
Me chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
Poke poke update pleade
artimismoon95 chapter 13 . 1/28/2016
This is just fantastic. I want to see the first option class of the year, Malloy throwing something in Harry's cauldron and harry just fixing it without batting an eye.
Me chapter 13 . 1/6/2016
Years. *years* have passed, and you left an entrancing story sit to gather dust... Just when it was reaching the point I always find most intriguing; how do your twists of fate effect what happens at school? Normally, with the story untouched in so long... I wouldn't even think to hope... But this I will add to my reading list, hoping that someday you will once again take up the pen and finish what is sure to be a masterpiece of fanfiction.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/28/2015
when r u gonna update
Pathseekerme chapter 13 . 12/18/2015
I think this is a terrific story! I have started reading it several times, and each time I come back to it is a chapter or two longer. I love the way you portray Master Figg-you make her into a real person!
delia cerrano chapter 13 . 8/11/2015
Please be one of those special authors that really finish their stories no matter how long it takes. I don't care that it was last updated in 2009; I just need to know "what happens next". I enjoyed this different view of Harry so much! And the characters...AU and canon? Wonderful!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/28/2015
I quite like this story. I've spent a LOT of time (too much time) reading Harry Potter fanfiction and I'd thought I'd exhausted this website of good, interesting, well-written stories. I've been listlessly searching for worthwhile reads and I've found another. I was reading this, wanting to know what happens in reagards to Harry's apprenticeship to Sebastian and eagerly awaiting the arrival of the other schools for the tournament only to find that it stops at chapter 13 and hasn't been updated in years. I guess this has been abandoned, but I just wanted to say that I really like this story.
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