Reviews for First Steps
MomentofTruth chapter 8 . 11/20
I like your writing style and admire you ability to craft an interesting story. Yes, you have some minor problems with spelling, proofing, and grammar. I don't think those problems add to the story, but I don't think they detract enough to not admire your style and plot. Keep in mind, the more you practice writing and incorporate constructive criticism the better your writing and stories will become. Keep up the good work!
tanithlipsky chapter 13 . 9/30
good
Guest chapter 13 . 3/25
WHy are the characters in the summary, harry and flitwick. I don't think you have even mentioned flitwick
Enishi-Haru chapter 13 . 3/5
Hello
Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't abandon
mackiechandler chapter 13 . 2/8
This is both interesting and well written. Like Sebastian. Want to smack Ron around. Scared of Dumbles.

Keep writing.
celticwitch77 chapter 13 . 1/29
Excellent story. I just wish it was completed.
Scarlet Lupin chapter 13 . 12/1/2016
This is awesome I love this story I can't wait for an update. I am definitely looking forwards to some more Harry and Viktor interaction and I'm looking forwards to Harry meeting Fluer. Will Harry still be participating in the tournament? What about Hermione and Ron will they resolve their friendship with Harry? Oh my god just so many questions please update again soon
PS- I see you stuck with Blaise Zambini being a girl, that totally threw me for a loop when I first read that I thought it was a typo then I was confused but hey what is fan fiction if not our playground to take liberties with an authors work. keep up the amazing work ;)
-SL xxxx
MarilynT chapter 13 . 10/29/2016
Well - this is an interesting story. I hope you pick it back up. I would like to see where you are going with this.
SofiaDragon chapter 8 . 8/25/2016
Aside from confusing "wander" and "wondersomething that had me flipped around a few timesthis story is awesome.
Nights Silhouette chapter 13 . 7/2/2016
A great story to date. Would be awesome too see more of it.
Me chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
Nudge nudge poke update?
Me chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
Still peeking still poking still hoping
Me chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
Poke poke update pleade
artimismoon95 chapter 13 . 1/28/2016
This is just fantastic. I want to see the first option class of the year, Malloy throwing something in Harry's cauldron and harry just fixing it without batting an eye.
Me chapter 13 . 1/6/2016
Years. *years* have passed, and you left an entrancing story sit to gather dust... Just when it was reaching the point I always find most intriguing; how do your twists of fate effect what happens at school? Normally, with the story untouched in so long... I wouldn't even think to hope... But this I will add to my reading list, hoping that someday you will once again take up the pen and finish what is sure to be a masterpiece of fanfiction.
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