Reviews for Symbolism
Elizander chapter 5 . 2/28
Thouhg I still believe themost, if not every single scene could be longer, the quick pacing keeps things interesting.
I was expecting Toph not to crush her parents. I don't know why, I just knew she wouldn't do it.
Elizander chapter 4 . 2/28
That was surprisingly easy. I honestly tought some terrotirs may try to ruint he wedding or something XD
Elizander chapter 2 . 2/28
I feel like this meeting should be far longer and more elaborate... But is still good anyway. It's how both chapters are just one big scene from each protagonsit.
Elizander chapter 1 . 2/28
We always knew Toph's parents were kind of assholes, but DAMMM!
ochreish chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
I love this story a lot, but I'm sorry to say that I burst out laughing at "clam yourself". I'm sure it was a mistake, but still. Hilarious.
Ruby of Raven chapter 18 . 11/15/2014
Amazing! XD This was so cute and fluffy. I wish there was more. You really nailed their characters in this. Great job!
AraelDranoth chapter 6 . 8/26/2014
Awww... I really wanted Toph to exact some form of vengeance against her parents!

Oh well... can't have everything we want I guess!
nowen chapter 2 . 6/24/2014
You did great. And this is awesome!
xXCourageousXx chapter 2 . 11/22/2013
I really like how you are setting the story up, perfecto :)
Otakugirl 13 chapter 18 . 10/16/2013
This is beautiful! :') Now, I'm having the sniffles of joy xD
Guest chapter 18 . 9/25/2013
I just kept reading and never for once stopped to see where i was in this story, and then... It says THE END! Aghhhhhhhhhhh, hiw did that happen, that has never happened to me before during fanfiction o.O

Absolutely fantastic work darlin', I adore this *a heart emote* (pretend it's there)
Guest chapter 18 . 5/7/2013
That was great! Toph and Zuko were so in character and im so glad you didnt focus on all the romance. U rock!
Guest chapter 18 . 5/2/2013
Really nice story ..though at the end Toph should have said to herself " I forgive you" meaning she forgave her mother because if it wasn't for her parents forcing her to marry she wouldn't have fallen in love Zuko
MAI742 chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
Very good! I was well-pleased with your grasp of characterisation and dialogue, though your lack of a beta-reader was both obvious and saddening (quite a few spelling errors and oddly-constructed sentences). The flaws were just cosmetic however; the core of the story and its characters was well-done.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
momo DIED! still...pretty good start
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