Reviews for Listen, You'll Understand
almost raining chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Poor Envy (I seem to find myself saying that a lot). Every time I watch his death in Brotherhood, I die a little inside. I should probably watch the 2003 version soon, just so I can read and understand the fan fiction.
Cheza the Flower Maiden chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Wow. Cool story.
YukinoKara chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
well written, you're a good writer.

as for the review left from "Patient Silence", I agree with "kittyclaw". PS is idiotic and scared of flaming with a real account -_-
DemonRaily chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
You did a really great job whit this one _
abbyjenna chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
that... was great.

KEEP WRITING!
Love's Labour's Won chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Makes sense; I like it!
burakku's apperantice chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
This is good. you should do this in a series.

burakku's apperentice
ofmustachesandtomatoes chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Wonderful! -claps- I loved it; really, it's awesome D. Great job!
Kittyclaw chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Aww, I like it. I think the way you did the bedroom scene worked out well (after a few thousand years, wouldn't you feel like sharing too?) And the ending wraps it up nicely :) Over all, I think it worked well.

P.s. Patient Silence? You are a douche.
Patient Silence chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Hm...

One thing; Envy was OOC during the conversation in the bedroom.

Two; Uh...what the heck?

Why would Envy tell Ed, his enemy, about his past? Why would he even consider letting the "little twerp" touch him?

Also...why write a story revolving around a sketch? If you keep writing every little idea you get into your head, you won't go anywhere. I'm not saying you're not a good writer, but you really need to think these things more thoroughly.

PS