|Reviews for namikaze sensei!|
| just some dudue chapter 1 . 3/6
That was a great chapter I hope you keep up this fic cuz i like it A LOT!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
You said not to bother you about that shift key, well, I won't.
But it's still anbu not ambu.
| killer4853 chapter 3 . 12/9/2013
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
can you make it where naruto goes out with someone that way it will be fun but not sakura no not her
| onepiecefannumber1 chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
| janessa33 chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
| Shirahane Aikawa chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Nice Chapter! However you need to edit this. Like for example
Some mistakes, they were speechless. then, surprisingly , sasuke spoke up. '' you expect us to believe that YOU are namikaze naruto? how could a 13 year old be such an accomplished ninja?''
'' i was a jounin when i was 13, uchiha.. sasuke was it?'' kakashi spoke up.
sasuke just shut up. then sakura started to talk.
'' uh... okay... uh... im haruno sakura... i like...''she started giggling and looking at sasuke..
it should be like this (obvious thing to do) "I was a jounin when I was 13..." blah blah the quotation such as (") this one should be close to the dialogue "Uh okay..." not " Uh okay"
If you're introducing a character and the character introducing their name it should also be in capital letter like, "Hi, I'm Haruno Sakura..." NOT in small letters. (I'm not claiming that I'm very good at this but even I know this simple things :) NOT that I'm claiming that you don't know simple things.
And yep one more correction, Its Anbu not AMBU. :) Anbu sounds nice that Ambu right? Anyway its Anbu..
Anyways keep up the good work!
| blue-hart chapter 3 . 9/8/2012
wow i like it cant what fore more
| TidusGT chapter 3 . 4/28/2012
| Sailor Solaris2 chapter 3 . 7/5/2011
You haven't updated in a long time...
| sugardaddy900 chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
good but really i cant see the point but do go on
| gabyxx21 chapter 3 . 10/27/2010
I loved it hope to see continued if not let me bite my leave good bye greetings
| chobits909 chapter 3 . 10/1/2010
woot! so far so good! pleassse continue XD
| Evci chapter 3 . 8/23/2010
Loved the story so far ! It has a good plot ! Kep it up and update soon !
| Soul knight sage chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
interesting if there is any chance you will continue i hope to read more if not to bad.