Reviews for Hiraishin World Tour
Guest chapter 7 . 10/12
Yknow, I was reading this on my phone and I fell out of bed laughing a few times.
Just a heads up
YokaiAngel chapter 7 . 8/10
Love the story!
Clover letter chapter 7 . 7/9
update fast please ;)
Akane Shinigami chapter 7 . 6/30
Lol, so funny! Hope you update again sometime soon!
Fallen Warrior2 chapter 5 . 6/18
XD. " I'm wet. I'm lost. I'm hungry. I'm not in a good mood "...

Fallen Warrior2 chapter 4 . 6/18

"Can I have the hat now?"
jupimako chapter 7 . 6/18
Googlemo chapter 7 . 5/21
this is funny fic, Love to see more against any reason!
kyugan chapter 1 . 5/5
Minato you perv
jeanette9a chapter 7 . 4/25
giggle naruto you just gotta keep on trying! just be glad you haven't been summoned to a seal on a person yet. after all who know if kakashi or someones else has one and what s/he might be doing when you pop inn, you might scarred for life!
The Flaming Darkness chapter 7 . 4/16
yes naruto you need to but your head on that tree
Loner Kid chapter 6 . 4/11
Loner Kid chapter 1 . 4/11
lol yondaime's a perv
KrisB-71854 chapter 7 . 3/22
I've wanted you to add a few more chapters to this for a while.

After reading your note, I'm sort of mixed. There was a part of me that wouldn't mind things going into porn land, but I think that it would be better if he stays innocent through out it all.

What's great though is he can actually bond, travel, and all the various girls and others might actually think that he was having hook ups all across the place. That's far more amusing than if he actually was doing it.

Thinking about it, you'd need for him to randomly appear to help out some of the same girls. Did Naruto learn how to draw the seal? He needs to either give some one the seal or have some one like Hinata or Temari find one and keep it with her always.

Than you can have Naruto just randomly show up around those girls.

Can he send his shadow clones out as well? The fic that uses that to best effect is P.L.H.'s CED. They never really do get that down, but they do have fun sending clones out and about to have adventures. Sending a hundred or more out would have various advantages. He can both start removing seals from places he doesn't want to show back up again as well as just more cameos around the place.

Although I'm liking the world trip, he needs to actually bump into random folks that give him training tips or advice as well. You know picking up tricks and abilities while out and about as well.
Winter's Folly chapter 2 . 3/7
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