Reviews for Hiraishin World Tour
dogbertcarroll chapter 7 . 5/13/2011
I'd say a fair few of us wouldn't mind a little porn.
Koyan the Wanderer chapter 7 . 5/11/2011
I was rolling on the floor! This is Hilarious!
CottonKey chapter 7 . 5/7/2011
I love your story. I love your Tobi too. 3 Can't wait to read future chapters!
Sashlea chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Is Temari Naruto's half-sister? Both favor blonde hair and the wind element.
Sashlea chapter 7 . 5/6/2011
No, you're writing isn't porn. I've seen porn, and it's very boring. Besides, you thankfully haven't gone into in-depth detail on the naked girls. If you had, the fun factor wouldn't be there. Since Ino recognized him, how often has she dreamed about Naruto?
Riku's-Way-to-the-Dawn chapter 7 . 5/5/2011
Do you have any idea how hard it is to find a comedy that also has a really good plot? This is the funniest thing I've read in a long, loooong time. Naruto is just that silly this could be cannon, especially since you added a few details that could segway to Shippuden during the time skip.

I adored the Naruto/Ryoga omake. They've both got that sweet, dumb, clueless, loveable vibe going on. Now I'm picturing fox boy in Nerma, trying to convince Cologne and Shampoo to sell ramen. Gods that can't end well but it would be fun. ;P

I'm off to explore your other fics and sing your praises. Just don't tell Naruto I had yakisoba for lunch instead. _
templar627 chapter 7 . 5/2/2011
Great story so far, cant wait for next update.
Fayneir chapter 7 . 5/2/2011
"Well, he had that blonde hair like Naruto's, and I don't know anyone else who would be caught dead wearing such an ugly orange mask." Far away, Tobi had the sudden urge to smack a bitch...I LOL'D SO much...most hilarious thing I've read this year. Looking forward to more.
DigitalTart chapter 7 . 4/30/2011
Accidentally stumbling upon a succession of naked women is, I think, one of those things that keeps on being funny forever. Like all those thousands of home videos of somebody's crazy uncle taking it in the nuts during a whacky boating mishap.

Also, I miss not-bent-on-world-domination Tobi. His departure from the canon timeline was a serious blow to my LOLing abilities. Yours is adorable. I want one!
DigitalTart chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Your fic punched me in the face with hilarious. I'm only one chapter in and it's going in my faves already. The Temari groping scene especially deserves an A, as does the insinuations about the Kazekage's wife's...extracurricular activities. Since the Yondaime Kazekage appeared to have been a humongous douche, this would totally fit IN CANON.
Jazmine Matrix chapter 7 . 4/28/2011
Excellent plot! So few use the uncontrolled popping all over the place in their fics.
FrictionX42 chapter 7 . 4/27/2011
Hehe, love the new chapter! Finally made it back to Konoha just to have to leave again right away...

And for those that he encountered... Yow. *waggles eyebrow suggestively*
Citycept chapter 7 . 4/26/2011
I can't stop laughing. These shenanigans are hilarious; Tobi asking for his jacket made my cheeks hurt.
CharmingKarma chapter 7 . 4/25/2011
O_o Your writing style has changed A LOT...*blinks* Huh, I seem to be still in shock...thanks for updating..*is still dazed*
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 7 . 4/25/2011
Fun stuff. Feel free to turn this into full-born porn though.
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