Reviews for Hiraishin World Tour |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Naruto, he just can't win for losing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I really love this fic. Update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. And more of Tobi, please. He's the total funnyman without meaning to. Thanks for the great entertainment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so funny! I was laughing the whole time! You do a great job! I don't know what else to say! It's awesome! Many kisses! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol that figures, he finally gets back only to have to run away from 3 kunoichi most like to kill him XD I love this story update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Tobi. I love Tobi so much. Can we meet up with more affable Akatsuki members? Please [falls to knees begging] |
![]() ![]() ![]() XDDD oh poor naruto... |
![]() ![]() ![]() And low and behold! The comedy fic got down with the porn fic and they created this god-like fic of epic pervyness proportions! |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUDE! Spoiler alert! What if Temari actually was the daughter of the yondaime hokage and the kazekage's wife? Thus making her naruto's older half-sister and making naruto a true family member of gaara's...that would be SO awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! Man, this is pure gold, great for a laugh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bah, you're not even close to the porn line. Hell, you just had a bath scene and didn't even pull the traditional girl on girl boob grab. In any case, amusing as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You always manage to surprise me. I was sure Tobi would trade his Akatsuki cloak for Naruto's jacket, and Naruto would end up being mistaken for one of them. But your way works out better, I think: the mask and jacket might have been a little too much orange. And the very image of Tobi stuffing it on over his cloak is priceless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. |