Reviews for Hiraishin World Tour
XxXNightcoreQueenXxX chapter 7 . 4/25/2015
giggle naruto you just gotta keep on trying! just be glad you haven't been summoned to a seal on a person yet. after all who know if kakashi or someones else has one and what s/he might be doing when you pop inn, you might scarred for life!
thesmollbean chapter 7 . 4/16/2015
yes naruto you need to but your head on that tree
TETRACIDE chapter 6 . 4/11/2015
TETRACIDE chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
lol yondaime's a perv
KrisB-71854 chapter 7 . 3/22/2015
I've wanted you to add a few more chapters to this for a while.

After reading your note, I'm sort of mixed. There was a part of me that wouldn't mind things going into porn land, but I think that it would be better if he stays innocent through out it all.

What's great though is he can actually bond, travel, and all the various girls and others might actually think that he was having hook ups all across the place. That's far more amusing than if he actually was doing it.

Thinking about it, you'd need for him to randomly appear to help out some of the same girls. Did Naruto learn how to draw the seal? He needs to either give some one the seal or have some one like Hinata or Temari find one and keep it with her always.

Than you can have Naruto just randomly show up around those girls.

Can he send his shadow clones out as well? The fic that uses that to best effect is P.L.H.'s CED. They never really do get that down, but they do have fun sending clones out and about to have adventures. Sending a hundred or more out would have various advantages. He can both start removing seals from places he doesn't want to show back up again as well as just more cameos around the place.

Although I'm liking the world trip, he needs to actually bump into random folks that give him training tips or advice as well. You know picking up tricks and abilities while out and about as well.
Winter's Folly chapter 2 . 3/7/2015
Winter's Folly chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
b3asthunter chapter 7 . 1/27/2015
Naruto awakening MS by destroying ramen shop...fucking epic
CMVreud chapter 7 . 12/21/2014
You want to turn down on the smut?
Meh, still needs more cowbell.
CMVreud chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Troublesome blondes tempting the universe!
Jashl Xxify chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
I see what you did there!
Guest chapter 7 . 12/6/2014
Kinda sad this hasn't been updated in a while. I'd love to see where his next couple stops would be.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Wild guess, and my own speculation, she is naruto's half sister.

Temari's blond
Gaara and their father have red hair
Kankuro and their mother have brown hair

This has always been something that has bugged me.
Ashen Author chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Good point Temari, why is the seal there. If this were to be finished, I bet the explanation would be hilarious.
Amanthya chapter 7 . 11/7/2014
This has made me laugh so many times! Thank you x100,000,000! That doesn't happen very often, I love it! Can't wait till you update!
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