|Reviews for Whispers in the Rain|
| TouchDouche chapter 1 . 5/3
I am leaving and I just wanted to tell you that this story is beautiful
| TouchDouche chapter 6 . 5/3
Aren't there anti-muggle wards around Hogwarts?
| allenx14 chapter 25 . 3/28
Dawwwwwwwwwwwwww that was an adorable end.
| Steel Heart Alchemist chapter 5 . 2/23
Ed is SOOOOOO out of CHARACTER!
| rhea chapter 8 . 2/6
yew with phoenix feather core voldemort's wand
| The Mirror Above the Sink chapter 25 . 1/24
*For some strange reason is crying*
I loved this story so much! You would not believe how much it inspired me to make my own FMA/HP crossover! I literally read all of it within the span of an hour. I really hope you make a sequel! I loved this (more than I should've) sooooo much! I couldn't stand to see that it was over!
Please, PLEASE make a sequel!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
WARNING! CARRY ON READING OR ELSE YOU WILL DIE, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl named Clarissa. She was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad that she went to kill all the staff in the hospital, so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her as humane as possible, but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death, she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. Apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes, u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. U will either get kissed or asked out. If u break this chain, u will see a little dead girl in your room. In 53 mins someone will say I love you or I'm sorry..o
| aewea chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
U R the best!
It was a beautiful chapter
| xggf chapter 3 . 12/23/2015
I am glad to find a crossover of Fullmetal Alchemist and Harry Potter, which isn't written with ridicilous grammar and punctuation and a stupid plot.
| Guest chapter 25 . 11/23/2015
Wouldn't the transmutation circle have to be changed in order to accomodate the kitten too? Most transmuattion circles are meant for specific things and having that extra matter would have had to be incorporated into the whole thing?
I'm just curious
Great ending by the way!
| Kawaii123455 chapter 25 . 10/24/2015
I honestly liked this story, maybe not 'love' it but still liked it. It had a few plot holes, some blank spaces for explaining, and simply needed 'more'. I read this story in about an hour and a half, so of course, it was pretty short. Lets start from the beginning...
Your core idea and plot was great itself, and I always had a thing for Mute!Ed stories. Even if Ed wasn't really mite, but... Harry meets Ed, brings him to The Blacks, go to Hogwarts and so on. Not the most original idea, but seeing it from a different persons perspective (yours) had always been kinda nice for me. I felt like the story went a little too fast and could've had more detail. For example, most of the time, you simply stated that everyone had a connection to Ed, I felt like you could've dived deeper into that, like Ginny, what had happened to have them become close? But I understand if you wanted to go the quick way around.
Some of the story had a few unnecessary parts. Snape's chapter for example, it wasn't all that important, as Snape ha little to do with the story. But I suppose I kinda liked that, but not really. The feeling is like watching a filler of your favourite show. It's not important in the least, but still nice to watch (read, in my case).
The end is what I have to say the most about. I simply wanted more. Yeah, he saw Alphonse again, but I would've loved for Ed to see others. Winry, Roy, Armstrong and so on. And some type of reaction. Although one good thing about this is that it lets the reader think about what might happen. Same goes for the Harry Potter world. While they did have a reaction, it still needed to be more. I'm not saying too much, I hope.
Other things I noticed were some parts weren't that realistic, unless that was intended, there were a few minor plot holes, needed more explanations and detail, especially aroun the end. I personally would love to see a sequel about both world (especially Ed's) start adapting. Like if Ed's mental state is fixed, how Harry will remember Ed from many years, if Ed ever does pay a visit, and so on.
Don't take all this too personally. This is an old story and I'm certain you've improved since 2008-ish. But all in all, I still liked this story. Maybe a 7.5/10, thank you for your work on this. :)
| pupeez4eva chapter 2 . 7/28/2015
yeeeeeesssss, well-written FMA/HP fic. You don't know how hard it is to find these things. Especially long ones. ESPECIALLY long, finished ones. I mean, it's exhausting, sifting through the piles and piles of fics filled with poor grammar, terrible OOC-ness, and horrendous plots. But then again, it's worth it when you stumble across little gems like this :) Can't wait to read the rest!
| White Wolf of Blizzards chapter 25 . 6/20/2015
Al's reaction: ONII-SAN! or faints* :)
| SilverDragonM00n chapter 9 . 5/22/2015
I totally misread virga as viagra and did quite the double-take, I barely avoided spraying water on my computer screen.
| Quiet Leaf chapter 17 . 3/1/2015
My favorite part of fanfictions like this is when the others discover that Ed has automail. :)