Reviews for Da Family
AdrenalineRush16 chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Wow, that was amazing! I loved Jack's lines at the end. This is so true. My only complaint is the accent. If you must have it, lighten it a little. We all know they have NY accents. It kind of clutters up your writing with all the weird spelling. So, is this from Davey's POV? (If so, the accent wouldn't be there at all, b/c Dave doesn't really have one) Other than that, loved it. It's very true and original.

AdrenalineRush16
Shodow wolf '7 chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
that was astonishing :) lol that was really good because it is so true. i can just picture you with that new york accent lol you know wat i mean lol this is so cool great job.