Reviews for A Second Chance
mumphie chapter 30 . 11/2/2019
An enjoyable, intriguing, and entertaining story. I enjoyed it very much. Quite a different take on the Time-travel story. One thing not answered as yet - perhaps in the sequel - was - who the man was who was in Diablos bed when Diablos came back from the bathroom. He was only mentioned once. I guess a loose end makes me wonder...
mumphie chapter 25 . 11/1/2019
Who are Arsenic and Odium? Is Diablos human? Part-human? Since he had red eyes as a two year old he didn't get them from over use of Dark Magic. Sooo - how do they fit in? He isn't aging, he didn't have a big growth spirt, he has ancient Wizarding blood in his veins - what/who is he? Does he know who his parents were? You would think the Potters would have run a test. So many ponderings...
mumphie chapter 15 . 11/1/2019
I hope Harry had his trunk shrunk and in a pocket!
mumphie chapter 12 . 11/1/2019
Whew - I was worried that the silver gift was a poisonous trap by Dumbles.
mumphie chapter 1 . 11/1/2019
Wish the will mentioned the rat and who was the secret keeper. Hope the brother can give and teach Harry love.
BelfryBats chapter 18 . 10/2/2019
It is fairly interesting so far, but the grammar in this chapter is all over the place.
Bele chapter 31 . 9/10/2019
one heck of a crazy story, bloody brilliant timed twist. thank you for sharing, loved every word
LBII chapter 30 . 8/14/2019
Very well done! I read the 1st 19 chapters or so quite some time ago and lost track of the story until 2 days ago. I was very anxious about the character of Diablos. However I knew you would have a better explanation and would not have Harry with worse evil than Riddle. Thank you for sharing your time, talents and imagination with us readers.
NabikiB chapter 23 . 8/12/2019
Inspirations can be found in the oddest places. Have Harry give Dia something small, cute, furry and alien, if you can figure out a way to make giving him a basket of something with tribble-like behavior...

As for the twins and pranks...if they are working on their candy line and get distracted, unintentionally leaving the Canary Creams lying around could work. Cuz I think that line thing he's tracking is Intent. So, where deliberately setting up a prank won't do the job, carelessness might.
NabikiB chapter 16 . 8/11/2019
Generally speaking, a prophecy which is not spoken by an actual deity in a 'This is what I'm going to do and how' way, is avoidable. The non-deity announced ones is called a 'common' prophecy and is just an indication of the likeliest outcome of a situation if nothing changes.

The second you change ANYTHING, a 'common' prophecy is voided.

So, it sounds to me (Prefix referenced) that you're using the standard 'rules' and that the fake prophecy is less of a fake and more of a common one...which was voided and died the second that circumstances changed. IE, if Harry had gone to the Dursleys it would still be active, but because he didn't it was voided.
CMVreud chapter 20 . 8/1/2019
What in all hells is up with the uncle? I smell shennennigans.
CMVreud chapter 17 . 7/31/2019
Gilderoy is an ass, Dumbledore is an ass and Ron Weasley is an ass. What do they do?
Braying that the Devil never gets them.
CMVreud chapter 11 . 7/31/2019
CMVreud chapter 9 . 7/31/2019
You know you are famous when...

And Ron's such a tool, I bet two knuts that Dumb-as-a-door tweaked a screw loose in that one.
*Shudder* I REALLY don't want to think about Rons sister.
CMVreud chapter 8 . 7/31/2019
Cute!baby!Harry seems to be a weapon of mass distraction, that little charmeur.
And, houf, Dumbydoor seems to be the usual prick.
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