Reviews for A Second Chance
BDSanta2001 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Interesting introductory chapter.
Dark who is to lazy to log in chapter 2 . 5/23/2008
...poor, poor, Diablos
xXShadowThornXx chapter 2 . 5/23/2008
that was a really good chapter and I hope yoou update soon
mitremlap chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
Great beginning- continue soon
kratos chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Hell of good start keep up the good work I look forward to the next update thanks and bye.
theblackrobe chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Still early to give any comment. But i think its a very good start.
Lilith Kayden chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Diablos Potter: with red eyes and perhaps a similar personality to, but not related by blood to Tom Riddle. Could James's brother Diablos be like a Gray Magic (neither really white nor dark)Voldemort? Certainly he's safe for Harry and for his Aurer co-workers, unless he is wrongfully provoked. He's not inherently evil like the Dark Lord Voldemort.

I will love to see the clashes between Diablos and Dumbledor as the Headmaster attempts to manipulate Harry and to get ahold of Harry's Gringots vaults, as well as the support he receives from Menerva and some other members of the Order who oppose Dumbledor's wrongful actions towards Harry and himself.

-Lilith Kayden
Makurayami Ookami chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
this is good. i loved the part where he threatened to slit dumbledore's throat.
Reading-Justdoit chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Continue Please? I found it highly interesting.
xXShadowThornXx chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Cool i like it pleaz update soon!
Steven Kodaly chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Well, this looks promising. A mysterious uncle, Rome, and amused goblins; what else could one ask?
freddyburn chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
nice, cant wait to read more... wondering about the name though.
Aurora Delilah chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
I like this story!

Can't wait to read more!


P.S is it a coincedence that Diablos means Devil, and that he never smiles? or did you do that purposely?
rosiegirl chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Good start so far.
Isles chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Great start to your story )
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