|Reviews for Visitations|
| Ginevra-Potter98 chapter 7 . 8/3/2013
that entire story, every chapter, was perfect. you did an amazing job!
| Estel-Undomiel25 chapter 7 . 7/13/2013
I really enjoyed this story! I think you did a fantastic job with all of the characters, and with their interactions with and feelings toward Harry. This is a great sort of afterward to that chapter in Deathly Hallows. And your last sentence is so powerful, it made me think of this beautiful wrock song: watch?v-VLXs7NYkv0 Keep up the great work. :)
| lucyblue22 chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
Well, I've been holding in this until I finished.
That was great. You captured the people and their emotions so well. This was one on the better pieces I've read today. Then again, I reread My Immortal earlier...
| Szors chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
Oh, wow! It was really beautiful. I loved everyything about it, the people you chose to visit Harry, their thoughts about him. I think everyome was in character and real. My favourite was the part with Hermione, I really loved how she told him that she's proud of him. It was a really original idea to bing a little closure to the battle and show the after effects. Thank you, an absolute favourite:)
| zechirator chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
This is so sad, but any fic about post-Battle of Hogwarts is inevitably sad. I really like your writing style.
Oh, and this line made me chuckle, when Hermione's "mind was already making lists" - very in character. :P
| harrykissedher chapter 7 . 5/5/2012
I loved this! I got little fluffies in my tummy in the Ginny, Mrs. Weasley, and the end of Harry's chapter. You almost made me cry in Hermione's. And at the beginning of Harry's, you had me scared for a moment! I thought this was one of those fics where he made it all up in his head. Sooo infinitely glad it isn't.
I do have a few constructive criticisms though: I feel like you may have used italics too much, especially in the earlier chapters. I liked and understood why you stressed the words you did, it just felt a bit much. Also, I think a couple times you accidentally replaces words with other ones (ie, someone should have been somewhere). But those are very very minor mistakes...I have seen some pretty terrible fics. This one is extraordinary! Do you know how much of a good writer you are? You're fantastic! I'm about to go read more of your stories, and I can't wait!
| Louey06 chapter 7 . 11/3/2011
Lovely i particuarly liked Ron's line about Harry;s thank you, that was funny.
| luvtheheaven chapter 7 . 8/29/2011
Seriously, wow. This whole fic was so good. Amazing story, well done with every chapter. Very memorable and unique and I just adore your writing, seriously. :P
| luvtheheaven chapter 6 . 8/29/2011
I love how Hermione pulls out a fresh set of clothes for Harry. ;) Details like that show just how in tune you are to all the characters and realistic things they'd think and do. I love it.
Now in this Ron chapter:
"His work toward Gryffindor Tower was leisurely"
- don't you mean "walk", not "work"?
"Ron didn't give the portrait but crawled through the hole"
- what? Didn't give the portrait what lol?
Also I'm not sure about this but:
"could he really just sleep it off, wake up and be okay? Harry may have been one of the strongest people Ron knew but could anyone be okay after the life Harry had been through."
Shouldn't that end with a question mark and not a period?
But yeah sorry for the nit-picky beta things, I'm loving the story so much though, seriously!
| luvtheheaven chapter 4 . 8/29/2011
"Harry may be a hero but it wasn't just a hero."
I think you meant "he" not "it". Right? ;)
Other than that, another flawless, *really* enjoyable chapter!
| luvtheheaven chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
I just read the first 3 chapters of this and they were all amazing! Flawless, really great reads! Molly's chapter was the first to make me tear up, and also though I never thought of her as a student at this school and I loved the idea of her watching Arthur play chess in the common room and whatnot... this was amazing. :D I'm gonna keep reading now... ;)
| brilliant incandescence chapter 7 . 7/26/2011
I'm glad those people all had a say. I think I liked Neville's piece the most. McGonagall's too.
| Flamingo917 chapter 7 . 4/20/2011
You did a great job with characterization. All of the chapters were great. I especially liked Ron's and Nevilles, though I liked the fact Harry dreamed of the Dursleys and his origin before the wizard world. There were some grammar mistakes, but they didn't affect the flow of the story.
| FuzzyBee013 chapter 7 . 3/19/2011
This was an awesome story. It was really emotional and sad but very realistic. I enjoyed it very much and hope to see more like it. keep up the good work :)
| Shel chapter 7 . 1/18/2011
I really liked this. you are good at their thoughts. You should do this for when they saw Harry dead. But we all ready know what Harry was thinking so maybe you should do the Weasley's and Hermione(: I'd like that