|Reviews for Shut up!|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
| Sergeant-Politeness chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
funny i liked it
REAL VAMPIRES SPARKLE!
| DustfingerFanGirlXD chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
ROFL ! that would be...strange...if Bella and Edward had sex...they would have a half Vampire half Human baby...hmm...
| DobbyWobby chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
funny! i feel so sorry for carlisle and charlie though, they must have been mortified! really good.
| fictioninmyheart chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
This was actually really amusing to me. I can deffinately see Charlie acting like this. I think it was kinda OOC for Carlisle-I can't really picture him saying shut up, but who knows. Maybe he would be mortified enough by the situation to warrant it...good job with the challenge!
| swallowingacloud chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
that was great! I couldn't stop laughing XD
| Pretty-in-Pink-girl chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I liked it.
It was very entertaining! :)
| Tail writer chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
I have just read the first paragraph and LOVED IT! You write really well.
A word of advice: even though it was posted for a challenge, maybe you could explain the challenge, or the setting, or maybe a short blurb.
Take in mind that I have only read the first few paragraphs. I, myself understood it, but adding a bit at the beginning might clarify some confusion or thoughts of "ooc-ness".
Please read my profile! I always do that for everybody else's things that I review; I read more than write.
| hazellwood chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
| Nikkirenzo59 chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Carlisle might have been just a little bit out of character, but overall the story was good.
| Jasper's Little Psychic chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
I liked it, it was amusing. I don't see Carlisle ever loosing his cool. Or saying Shut up. but it was amusing
| True Queen Of Chaos chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Haha, poor Carlisle! Nice story, I could totally picture everything that happened! It was very funny!
| stinkybunny chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
who would ever think Carlisle could get unglued like that? really funny!