Reviews for One Step Closer
KayleeMariee chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Loved it! Also your comments about no alcohol and child labor laws made me laugh. I love how near the beginning of the game they leave Marlene in charge of the bar when they go to the reactor, and she was, like, four.
mom calling chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
This is pretty good. Don't know if you check in once in awhile, but in case you do, I enjoyed reading your story. I haven't read a "drinking game" story, so you had a great idea and ran with it, and I think did a good job. It's been awhile and you've not written, so maybe life got in the way? Best wishes. mc
purinai chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Aww. ]]

Creative, i lubed eet! *gives cookehs*

Great job!