|Reviews for The Sensei|
| LancelotPUA chapter 6 . 1/17/2013
This right here, is the epitome of perfection.
Naruto against impossible odds, yet still managing to just survive.
It's great, you haven't made Naruto godlike, you've kept his strength realistic and the plot is rather original.
I'm loving the little side twist of Naruto being hunted by his own family (Sister?) Hopefully their battle will end in death. I really don't like it when authors make it so no one dies in a battle and they become friends after.
I'll definitely keep reading if you keep writing.
| Regin chapter 6 . 11/16/2012
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
| My Solitude chapter 6 . 8/26/2012
This is pretty intense. O.o
| BuriedHumanity chapter 6 . 9/30/2011
I hope you upadte this story nd somehow get naruto a lot stronger a lot quicker as you have made this bitch Natsuki quite stong to kill naruto and i want Naruto to kill her and not be such a bitch.
Get Naruto to learn something from the snake like he learnt sage training from the toads.
| tyla chapter 6 . 9/16/2011
dude this story is awesome, please tell me there will be a 7th chapter one day, such a good story to be wasted and i neeeeeed to see what happens next! update soon please lots of love!
| Foresthunter chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
awesome! hope for more!
| gender-bender-lover-101 chapter 6 . 12/26/2010
oh god! finallly i was getting tired of all those naruto fics that were wrong...they did not show ninja how the are. they sugar coated it way to much...thats one thing i majorly like about this fic, ya know...although i relly dont see the purpose of natsuki as it is now i degest her...i mean i want to believe naruto can beat/kill her but unless he majorly grows up and is trained by the toad and slug. AND surpasses them...and i ink maruto should be a genius in seal and healing...he cares about ppl right well he can also be a combat medic...cause natsuki isnt a healer and a killer she's jiat a killer...but naruo can be both and No Orange clothing as much as i love orange it just isnt a ninja color unless naruto masterz stealth...and with seals he could tatoo them into/onto his skin...sorrry im kimda a it obssessed withgreat naruto fics..ya know. well i gotta go but please update soon and ttake my ideas into consideration...since im caughtup on all that has happened. at the end of every future chapter ill review cause im falling in love..haha
| KafeiDetour chapter 6 . 11/24/2010
Excellent story. I greatly enjoyed reading it.
| FFwatchdog chapter 6 . 11/19/2010
Naruto is a total shiit stain, you've made sure of that. Basically he has nothing. He should leave jiraiya and konoha, you have created "pussy-naruto" and pussy naruto can't do anything, hes basically as strong as sasuke at valley of the end battle, maybe and thats a big maybe. I'm tried of reading how his oc sister has "everything" 2 summoning contracts? She pretty much kage level, how is that possible, she isn't even a demon vessel.
I'll check back and see if "pussy-naruto" who lets everyone walk all over him is still here, if he is i'm done with this story. This story had a lot of potential.
| david9999 chapter 6 . 10/18/2010
I really enjoyed your Naruto story The Sensei it is very good. :)
I like the storyline and the way the chapters are done.
Please keep up the good work mate.
| Jerex chapter 6 . 10/1/2010
when's Naruto gonna learn some new amazing jutsu like the Rasagen? is Jirai gonna teach him hiroshi (flying thunder god technigue?) sounds like his sis is way ahead of him, and he's gonna need an edge.
| Lolol chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Nice a/n...all that shit you mentioned is what I tend to avoid when reading ' lolol naruto has 25 gf and a tail and a little fox summon that's eats pol lolol' no ... Anywho great fic ya got goin here
| Jerex chapter 5 . 9/27/2010
great story, poor naruto's had it rough huh? Damn I'm such a sucker for these sought of stories, keep up the good work
| Juoppo chapter 4 . 9/26/2010
Canon rehashing makes for a boring chapter.
| Cloud Ex-SOLDIER chapter 6 . 9/21/2010
A different and good way of depicting Manda. I was hoping he would omit Naruto's sacrifice requirement but that would've been too easy.
I liked the summary of the 2nd Shinobi War, alot of people only thing that might will went it all but there is so much in war that it boggles the mind. And boots on the ground, there's really no way to describe, people have tried but it's a unique experience.
Very good job humanizing as well as demonizing the characters. War changes people in all sorts of ways.
Looking forward to the next chapter.