Reviews for The Syrup
Amethystaura chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Seme Light & Uke L forever & evermore! Please write more uke L! There isn't enough of uke L in this fandom! Reading about Light desperately & passionately screwing him with all that sweet syrup, made me cream myself!
SengetsuPwnzU chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
yes yes yes dear GAWD write more! this was THE smexxii-est lemon ve read so far! more more!(and yes i do realize that all sounded wrong)
LFuCkToY chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
You are insane. I like you! nice story but i bit fast and heavy on the smutt. And goodness me doesn't L have a dirty mouth. *tsk tsk* Keep writing your doing great.
L-Loves-Light chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
it was very good!

L was a bit OOC...

but it was still smexxii! WOOT!
Warratah chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
WOW! that was relly good! i am thuroughly[sp?] impressed!

but i don't really believe that was your first one... i think your lying!

but despite wether your a lyer or not, you still are an amazzing writer! keep it up dude!

[that's right! amazing with 2 'z's!]
Crystal Inucha and kira Inucha chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
This story is awsome and I love it!
UnknownZero chapter 1 . 11/16/2008

Wow...very good.

I vouche for seme Light! XD
dune-ashes chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
hot hot hot, L is a perfect uke for me XD
lelalemon chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
That was incredible.
Greendayluvr93 chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
YES YES WRITE ANOTHER And L should be seme
Amaya chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Oh, KAMI, that was hot! Now how am I supposed to get to sleep? It's 5:42 AM, I'm EXTREMELY turned on, I don't have a boyfriend to release my tension, and I'm not into "self pleasure." So thanks a lot :P

However...feel free to write more _~
Kittychan45133 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Oh Man! That was really HOT!

Light should be Seme!

NO...Make a two shot!

Light seme and then L seme!

Dear sweet juice...! That is an orgasm on a bun!
SpringWaterCold chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
wow.. totally write more.
Eiri and Kurama lover07 chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
i read this like two minutes after reading your other story and umm... i think i'm blushing... yes you should write more, and uhh... damn that was hot.
Night Yagami chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
OMG...I think I orgasmed just reading this.

That was unbelievably hott.

Light should ALWAYS be seme. Always. Wow.

The PWP is 100% forgiven. What an excellent lemon.
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