Reviews for Broken Heart
Blaze828 chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
finnish please
Fifille chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Aaah! Noo! You have to update this! I need to know what happens!
Plumtree5991 chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
Ohh that's so sad :( but really good :-) i just wanted to punch Jasper in the face and say fool get your hairy ass back to alice! lol well done a great read :) keep it up
TheGirlSmiles0 chapter 2 . 6/18/2009
r u gonna finish the story?
Helewisetran chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
poor jasper, making such a big mistake. I just hope Alice and the rest of the family take him back
letthesongtakeflight chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Aww, this is so sad. I've been thinking about what would happen if Jasper left too. chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
that was good but you should have the coversations on a new line like

"i liked your story" banana said

"thank you!" replied apple

that was a stupid example but i couldnt think of anything else. sorry if you think im being rude but im just trying to help!
fairydustillusion chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
aw... poor alice!you should write another chapter with jasper coming back...
Jood2395 chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Aw! Write another chapter. I want to know why he left!
FuzzySlipper19 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
wow, that was powerful *sob*. excellent job!
BlondhairPinkgumSoNotMyForte chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Sniff, Sniff, oh man this is so sad. I feel sry for Alice already. And who ever thinks that this is funny should have there brain examined. Anyways keep writing
MmeGray chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
God, Alice! You made me cry again! Seriously! God, I'd almost forgotten how broken you were after your...episode. Geez, girl. The fact that you made my cry again really proves something. Well, see ya later, sweety. Bella
KatheryneL chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
That was SO FUNNY!

You Should so write a sequel!

But wait, what else was on the tape?


Nikkirenzo59 chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Aww that was so sad, I loved it! The only thing is that when someone new is talking, you're suposed to start a new paragraph. Other than that it was very good.