Reviews for Birth of an Akatsuki
Dr. Stilla Live chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
Amazing first two chapters. AMAZING. :D
D3ath Mess3nger chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Man, this first chapter just...

I really feel pity on Deidara. I like the character. ART IS A BLAST!

The ending is what gave me most chills. Funny how I get sad over the death a Bird rather than a human. It's just who I am, I guess...
MoonIdiot chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
This one was amazing too... You catch so much feeling in the last sentences! On this it got me EMOTIONAL. Just like on chapter one!

So yeah, I liked this too~ Fave fave fave...
MoonIdiot chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
This was so...tragic. I don't know how else to describe it. The last part, about Deidara accidentally killing Arashi, almost made me cry.

You have a nice plot here.
laruna luna chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
wow- just wow...
withoutaim chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
This story really got me captured. I have not yet read the second chapter, but I will as soon after I have finished writing this! You captured emotions perfectly here, I personally think. Also, it is a very interesting thought of Deidara's past, and I think that you have some logic here. I could also really picture him standing there on the hill, clutching the bird, it's so.. Real.

I really like this, it is a fav. clearly! You really have talent in this area. (:

otherrealmwriter chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Wow. This is pretty cool.
Lightning Blade chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
This is a very meaningful story on Deidara's past! Great job! I love it very much! -
Dead Man Writing Is Dead chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
*sob*sob*sob* that is so horrible (in a good way) ;_;
Reality Inhibited chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Absolutely lovely story. Oddly enough, I drew a picture of a little Deidara holding a bird last night, too. Love this story, it's emotional, but not overdramatic. Favouriting it.