|Reviews for Does this shirt make me look|
| Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Thta is sort of mean and funny. This was awesome
| yume76 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
i really love sakura and ino in yaoi fangirl mode. and it was super hot and kinky.
| OliveKi chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
LOL, kinky xD Very nice job, I loveeeedddd iiiiittttt
| QB100 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
i totally loved it i wish there was another chapter
| ms.Clair K Ookami chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
| OddlyAlice chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I noticed a typo. "He let go of his lover's cock before he could organism." It's "orgasm". I figured a typo during your sex scene (and of one of the key words too!) was something you'd want to be alerted about. Hope I helped!
| lovemahBF chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Holy fucking shit, I love this O.O
| KyouyaxCloud chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
HA HA HA VERY FUNNY!
| Harveste Starr chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
So super hot and kinky. I bet I'm grinning like a maniac right now and my sister is staring at me like I'm a freak. I'm not a freak!
| Zailana chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Nice plot, but the verb is called 'to orgasm' and not 'to organism'. And really, you don't have to use the word 'raven' in every single sentence. The boy's name is Sasuke.
| Kattfish chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Omg! That was good. w i really liked it. It had a good plot, the only problem i saw were grammatical errors but hey, we all make mistakes lol but overall it was amazing. w job well-no, awesomely done! XD
| Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
OMG! The ending was priceless! I loved it!
| Mayuri-Elize-Ackart chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Lolz! Read the fine print! Oh... are they going to sell copies? Those would sell hella quickly, SOLD OUT in less than an hour! x3
| HinaLuvLuvChan chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Naruto sure knows how to turn shopping into kinky lolz!
| SengetsuPwnzU chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
i want a copy! im getting $500 tomorrow ill pay you for it!