Reviews for Zero Tolerance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, very well-written ! Thanks for sharing :) |
![]() ![]() Loved the story! Thank you! E. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to reading the rest in the series. This was incredibly well written. Good job ) ~Tori |
![]() ![]() Omg! Sorry. U did right. Allow me say. OMG! ZERO AND YUKI IN LOVE! FINALLY! |
![]() ![]() WOW! Your story is compelling, electric, eloquent. I love it. You could write your own romantic fiction and I would buy it. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() Just wow, the describing of 'everything' was amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story a lot and will add it to my favourites. It was a little heavy on the adjectives at times, but also flowed really well and had a great ending. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() Fantastically written. Well done. I'm normally not into suck graphic fanfiction but your sentence structure was on point and your words choices were fantastic. The way you described things was erotic yet poetic. Really well done, good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() I know this is 2015 now and this was written in 2008 but I just found this and I have to say, daaaaammmmmnnnn! I think I have a new favorite fanfiction |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn ! Really hot and vampiric sexy time. It's a fantastic job you've done here. Thanks ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story |
![]() ![]() Jesus Christ...It would be a SIN if you didn't continue so beautifully written and perfectly put together that once i started reading I COULD'NT STOP! Your diction is marvelous and your scenery and character personalities are...just perfect. I love your work PLEASE KEEP GOING! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realize this is from 2008, but I wanted to leave a quick review since I just discovered this fic and have read it like five times in the last couple weeks. I smile every time, multiple times, and I'm sure I will read it again. Your Zero and Yuuki are perfectly written, and your Zero makes me drool. I am usually a fan of Yuuki/Kaname, but you may be changing my mind... Amazing, great, superb work. |