|Reviews for THE RIVALRY OF A TRIDENT AND AN OWL!|
| Creamoe chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
It's pretty good. I think Annabeth is a little exaggerated. Pregnant women don't yell all the time. And mood swings happen both ways. In the middle of her yelling, you should have her stop and apologize to Percy. Just do a bit of research about pregnancy, tone Annabeth down a bit, and you'll have a pretty good and entertaining story.
And I love the name Skyler.
And...The number is 867-5309, not 837-5309.
| xXAll NighterXx chapter 9 . 11/7/2012
You should have a chapter about annabeth having the babies
| LovesToWriteForever chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
"No, of course not! Some guy who was trapped in a hurricane, then in a fire cause by the hurricane, then in a flood putting out the fire both caused by the hurricane and who is now in the hospital, is writing a biography.'
| Pug1998 chapter 9 . 6/21/2012
haha loved the last line and the story is pretty entertaining:):):)
| SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 9 . 10/29/2010
love it! love next gen stories!
| PerseusJackson14 chapter 9 . 7/21/2010
plz hurry up with the next chapter
| PerseusJackson14 chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
she screamed at trina running around
| PerseusJackson14 chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
i think annebeth is hotttttttttttt! and i don't hate her
| Captain Clueless the First chapter 9 . 6/29/2010
Oh dear, someone is going to die from exposure to Annabeth's wrath.
| flawedesires chapter 9 . 6/28/2010
Genius! Annabeth pregnant? I swear I almost fell off my chair! The only thing is...Skylar? No offense meant, but that's like the second worst male name in the history of mankind. Anyway, total genius, awesome story, love it! Keep it coming!
P.S. In case anybody was wondering (probably nobody, but whatever), the #1 worst male name in mankind is Heath. Just think about it. Seriously
| Horseybella1197 chapter 9 . 6/21/2010
Awesome. Annabeth is funny when she's pregnant. I hope you get alot of reviews!
| Thursday 13 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
OOC, cliche, and putting the title in all caps is against the rules.
| Eminnis chapter 9 . 6/20/2010
*stumbles back* Sheesh, Annabeth, chill! Good job, keep up the good work!
| Eminnis chapter 7 . 6/19/2010
That was...confusing. Was it supposed to be confusing? Good chapter...
| volant au-dessus chapter 7 . 6/19/2010
im kinda confused about this chapter but i really like the ones before and how crazy Annabeth is :)