Reviews for Why?
needaprofile chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Good job! I can totally picture that!
9.0 playa chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
awesome
FallenAngelEstel chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I liked this story very much, I was impressed at how you explained why Pit can't fly. I had done some research myself, and what you have written, is pretty much what I found out. Keep up the good work!
hello chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Fly up to the sun...?

:iseewhatyoudidthere:
The Waterbender chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Wow

I totally agree with you

And

I discovered Pit in SSB.B too

He's kinda cute

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I love this story,

The Waterbender
Iczhihal chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Aww, that was sweet. It is a really good explanation too...
NinjaPi chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
I just love Pit :P
Nira Rose chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
adorable~
Silvery Night chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
IT did not really make much sense to me. Sorry- It was just a little short thats going... your stories will be great in the future! :)
GamerLioness chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Interesting take on Pit's origins! It was a very well-written brief story.
anon chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I like this. Pit is one of my favorite characters in Brawl and I liked how you worked in the myth of Icarus into your story.
Sweet Reichel chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
It's cool!
kaibayami1 chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Good job. That was very interesting. I hope you will write another story about Pit.
iPod Junkie chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
this was pretty good. is this really what happened? I heard somewhere about Pit buring his wings but that's about it.
Shi-Long Begone chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Nice!
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