|Reviews for The Art of Comedy Combat!|
| dragonmaster1748 chapter 20 . 8/20/2013
from mortal kombat 2
| aar60493 chapter 28 . 2/19/2012
cool. can not wait for it, but please try and get back to where the story was soon
| madnessman chapter 12 . 2/9/2011
dude your fic is hilarious and I practicly laughed my butt off in most of your jokes (I think my face is still red) anyway I really hope you finish this
| anonymous chapter 4 . 2/2/2011
If i'm dueling you, and a friend of mine walks in and stabs you in the back, that's cheating.
If we're having a contest of wits, and you take a mind-enhancing drug, that's cheating.
In sports, if you give yourself artificial advantages, that's cheating.
Hinata and Naruto cheated.
And if you're arms are cut off, you can't wield a weapon. Likewise, if you're chakra points are F*CKING CLOSED OFF you aren't moving, no matter how much chakra you have. If I pour concrete over the entrance of a tunnel, no car is getting past, no matter how many or how big. And we all know what happened when Zaku's chakra built up behind closed-off points.
Kaboom. Instant loss of arms.
| anonymous chapter 3 . 2/2/2011
Sad. Absolutely sad. You'd think that instead of standing around, Kurenai, Ino, and Shikamaru would intervene when they say Naruto, in their observation, molesting a 12-year-old girl. Really.
Oh, and mindset/psyching up has no impact when the levels of the combatants are so mismatched. If I have a AK-47, and you have a slingshot, no amount of encouragement is going to cause the outcome to not be your bullet-ridden corpse.
Fact: Neji is a genius. Hinata just isn't as good. Neji can stop your heart in an instant with Byakugan. Hinata isn't that good. Neji is better than Rock Lee AND Sasuke, both of whom can take out Naruto in an instant in canon at that point. After all, Naruto only has clones, and those take huge amounts of chakra.
Naruto should have died long ago. If a whole city hates him, there's going to be one or two fanatics who'll lop off his head with a kama or something. After all, Gaara was almost killed by his family, and Naruto has always been alone...unprotected. No ninja is skilled enough to protect a child in a marketplace from a sneaky, well-placed knife.
So, uh, you write well, but this plot sucks.
| anonymous chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
Just so you know, banana peels aren't actually slippery. Not unless you soak them in oil first, but most things are slippery in oil.
Also, laughing gas doesn't cause laughter, it's actually a VERY mild general anesthetic.
Also, I find it hard to believe that ninjas who can survive stab wounds and massive blunt trauma and tissue damage can be taken down with a rubber chicken, since chakra, spirit energy, isn't solid. True, it can interact with actual matter, and others' chakra, but in the show, we see MANY cases where chakra-enforced weapons and massive area attacks do jack squat.
Even assuming banana peels cause slipping, Kiba would have fallen backwards, not towards Naruto.
Also, WHERE IS HE PULLING ALL THIS CRAP FROM!
And pie doesn't actually cause obscuration of vision. It falls off easily, and the simple reflex known as blinking protects the eyes.
If you plan to use glue later, know that glue doesn't actually cause instant sticking. If it does, it's no longer glue, it's tar.
Just because it's comedy, doesn't mean it has to be completely ridiculous.
I respect your authorhood, but the same thing that gives you the right to write also gives me the right to criticize your plot in any and every way possible.
Also I am bored, and i hate Naruto's character.
Seriously, a harem? No girl wants to share with others, and I doubt that those girls will want to be "sleeping" with chakra clones.
In other words, I hate this story. You're a good author, but...just no. Please stop thsi farce.
| The Epitome of Eccentricity chapter 10 . 1/21/2011
Oh snap! I can see it now... Orochimaru as... The Joker!
| Chris ShadowMoon chapter 7 . 1/19/2011
AND THAT'S THE BOTTOM LINE, BECAUSE ROCK LEE SAID SO!
| Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 10 . 12/18/2010
The thought of of Orochimaru's Inner Imp coming out makes me want to go into the fetal position while sucking my thumb!
| daniel 29 chapter 18 . 12/13/2010
I'VE BECOME OROCHIMARU!" Jiraiya shouted at the top of his lungs, rocketing out of the bed at breakneck speed. He leaped to the corner of the room, and assumed the fetal position, rocking back and forth and repeating in a broken and eriee tone, "I've become Orochimaru...I've become Orochimaru... I've become Orochimaru..."
Well at least a hetero sexual version of orochimaru anyway
| xxxRed Ravenxxx chapter 2 . 12/8/2010
love it I died laughing
| Sean Malloy-1 chapter 28 . 10/4/2010
Why can't you start on your rewrite in your spare time this year?
| gryphonsson chapter 12 . 10/4/2010
I AM NOT A MORON OR A RETARD! I WILL BLOW THE PERSON WHO SAID THAT TO KINGDOM GO!
| Genichiro chapter 28 . 10/4/2010
Fair enough, nothing wrong with wanting to go and do things better; good luck.
| jghetrick chapter 28 . 10/4/2010
Hmm ok if you want to redue it. Part of the atraction was the glaring plot holes, they made it funnier. Mainly because I thought you had them there on purpose. But please keep the previews to an extent. At least give us cracktastic funny previews. Honestly it doesn't mater if they are real or not, but they make it funny