Reviews for Please
Swallow in the Cloud chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Poor Peter and Edmund. You didn't even let Peter finish telling Edmund that he loves him. :(
Heliopause chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Grim and ingenious, showing how very cleverly cruel Jadis is.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
This was... incredible.

Stunningly horrific and gut-wrenching, but still heart-warming and somehow justifiably poetic. I don't even know how to describe this. But it was fantastically written. I just read this over and over, staring almost in disbelief at the scene you created. Especially with that last line... I...

:'(

This is the saddest and most emotional thing I've read in a long, long time.

Oh my goshhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Sapphireswimming
marble-fire chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I am going to cry, that was amazing. So intense, the end was beautifully written yet horrifying to imagine. Poor Peter and Edmund D':
Pulcher Papilio chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Intense and beautiful.

I loved it.
chocodrizzle chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
I'm in tears.

Beautiful story.
zeppelin13 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Ahh... the last line just kills... It's so horrifying, and yet in a way it's a poetic way for Edmund to die. I'm sure Peter would hate it, but I think Edmund wouldn't mind staying in his brother's arms...

By the way all your fics are wonderful, especially those with Edmund and Peter.
Highqueen Julietta chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
boah... great!
Wildfire2 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Ohh I wish you'd continue this! I know you meant it as a dark one shot, but they don't have to die! Aslan could turn him back and Lucy's cordail would heal him. It could work!

Wildfire
LunaNigra chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
That's mean... Poor Edmund...

Luna
GoldenAshes chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Br. Terrific. Br.
Perspicacity's.Vocabulary chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Ya know...I was warned. And I still feel icky.

I don't see the point to this story.
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
NO! PETER! EDMUND! Oh that is so sad! Like a horrible nightmare!

It's a bloody brilliant idea though, and you wrote it well ;)
Gwenneth chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Ep. That was...I don't have the words, really. I keep coming back to your stories and rereading them and they always hit me, even though I KNOW what is going to happen! Loved it the first time, still love it. Dark, yes, but c'mon, I like a little dark once in a while!
aslgajhgjadfh chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Oh man. You actually had me crying a bit that time. It's probably a bit abnormal how much I enjoy dark fics like this even when they make me cry...
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