Reviews for Please
Swiftlet in the Cloud chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Poor Peter and Edmund. You didn't even let Peter finish telling Edmund that he loves him. :(
Heliopause chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Grim and ingenious, showing how very cleverly cruel Jadis is.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
This was... incredible.

Stunningly horrific and gut-wrenching, but still heart-warming and somehow justifiably poetic. I don't even know how to describe this. But it was fantastically written. I just read this over and over, staring almost in disbelief at the scene you created. Especially with that last line... I...


This is the saddest and most emotional thing I've read in a long, long time.

Oh my goshhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

marble-fire chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I am going to cry, that was amazing. So intense, the end was beautifully written yet horrifying to imagine. Poor Peter and Edmund D':
Pulcher Papilio chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Intense and beautiful.

I loved it.
chocodrizzle chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
I'm in tears.

Beautiful story.
zeppelin13 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Ahh... the last line just kills... It's so horrifying, and yet in a way it's a poetic way for Edmund to die. I'm sure Peter would hate it, but I think Edmund wouldn't mind staying in his brother's arms...

By the way all your fics are wonderful, especially those with Edmund and Peter.
whydontyouletmedelete chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
boah... great!
Wildfire2 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Ohh I wish you'd continue this! I know you meant it as a dark one shot, but they don't have to die! Aslan could turn him back and Lucy's cordail would heal him. It could work!

LunaNigra chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
That's mean... Poor Edmund...

GoldenAshes chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Br. Terrific. Br.
Perspicacity's.Vocabulary chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Ya know...I was warned. And I still feel icky.

I don't see the point to this story.
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
NO! PETER! EDMUND! Oh that is so sad! Like a horrible nightmare!

It's a bloody brilliant idea though, and you wrote it well ;)
Gwenneth chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Ep. That was...I don't have the words, really. I keep coming back to your stories and rereading them and they always hit me, even though I KNOW what is going to happen! Loved it the first time, still love it. Dark, yes, but c'mon, I like a little dark once in a while!
aslgajhgjadfh chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Oh man. You actually had me crying a bit that time. It's probably a bit abnormal how much I enjoy dark fics like this even when they make me cry...
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