Reviews for My Everlasting Love
his babi seal chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
loved it as usual! like everyone already said, it was really smart to compare the stories. now i really DO want to watch that movie again! haha, well good job. i still find it amazing that you can write so many one-shots and make each of them so wonderful!
mellark chapter 1 . 5/18/2008

That truly was touching.

You managed to combine two of my favorite novels on one short story.

Kudos for that.

That was truly sweet.

Keep up the great work!

dancing.rox464 chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
That was nice. I think i would have enjoyed it more if i had enjoyed the book Tuck Everlasting, but it was my least favorite teacher EVER that made me read it.

Your story was cute though. It was interesting the way you compared them to other stories.
twinerd chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
WOW! I love it! its so sweet!
DreamingLillies chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
the end was corny BUT I STILL LOVED IT! some good corny ending is always great! Maybe that word is a little harsh? I mean like mushy and all...Anyways, i never even thought ab out that movie and Twilight, good call. It is freaky how alike they are...ha i remember when i went to go see that movie i left the movies yelling 'they rais your spirts up and you think everything goign to be great, and then BOOM they drop ya like a hot potato!'

Sorry stroll down memory lane...

Good story and do we get to read the Bella POV? eh, eh?

all time low high chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
oh. my. gawd. this is like really perfect. i never would have thought of tuck everlasting or peter pan and how they compare. it's just too... perfect. well keep writing. i lovee ur stories
Tuggummi chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Amazing. You capture the characters so well!
Kuroi Garyuu chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Aw! So good, but so sad! I love the book and movie Tuck Everlasting! I never actually made the connection between Bella/Edward and Winnie/Jesse. Great observation! :P
Kari chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
I loved your story! I haven't watched Tuck Everlasting in a long time and I completely forgot about the similarities. I love how you put it into the Twilight story line. I thought it represented Bella's feelings very well. I read a lot of fanfiction and I only review the stories I feel are worth it. Great job! I now want to go watch Tuck Everlasting. lol.

Kari :)

P.S. The moment you said she was watching a movie, I was able to figure out which one by your title. I'm usually wrong when I guess, so that made me happy. lol
Beatlemaniac1 chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
What a great one-shot! Very coincidental how similar the two stories are and I'm glad you made that point. Keep on writing!
kittensandcombatboots chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
It was so good. There are tears in my eyes.

Incredible job.
curlyk03 chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
i find it funny that someone else noticed the striking similarities to Tuck Everlasting. it's uncanny.

anyway, that was a very cute oneshot. i very much enoyed reading it. nicely done!
GoldenMoonlight17 chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Aw...that was really cute. You Rock! Keep Updating all your stories! I love them!
Livy Alice chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
YES! I realized a while ago the similarities between Tuck Everlasting and Twilight. This was simply brilliant.

Small typos but nothing too bad.
caww chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
That was good of the comparison of Wendy and Winnie...that Bella wanted to make her version of forever and everlasting love.

Sweet. Cute.

...and Alice seeing this as a vision. Amazing

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