Reviews for The Hill
OSK chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Damn thar be som gud 'tang!
rosealineleaf chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
pretty good, but not great, sorry! but if u add more details, and use correct grammer and spelling, ur other stories (in the future) will be great!
Mika Macaronic chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
awesomo!
rutger5000 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
What can I say? It's hot. It is all it should be.
xwhitemoonx chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
cool
cell phone chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
what is cum
Aki666 chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
AWESOME!
soulterror chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
ah

omg loved it heheh great job _
LillyAnnSkigh chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
nice story(even though i shouldn't be reading things like that)
uchihakiriko chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
lol dirty but cute
anonymous reader chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
not bad.

the way you wrote in past tense though kinda bugged me. but that's just me. haha.
Kei-nii-sama chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
WOW I LOVED THAT I WOULD PUT A SECOND CHAPTER THE BIGGINING SHE GIVES BIRTH AND THEN SO ON I GIVE IT 100/10
starfire chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
good!best story ever!u really got e into bleach!)
ichirukifan13 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
EW! SO NASTY! & KAWAII! GOOD STORY!
Super Saiyajin Goku chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
It's pretty good. The grammer definitely needs some work, but it seems like you must have translated it from the original language? I was able to follow easily enough because I know about 3 languages but it's probably harder for others. Anyways still good!
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