I just spent days reading this, and I am very disappointed with the ending because it feels like you are punishing Mai and Anag because their partners don't love them but pity them.

Anag doesn't learn anything but is constantly rewarded, everyone in the story had to change to become better.
Sokka learnt what it takes to be not only a good leader but someone who knows when to let go of control.
Toph got to get better at giving emotional advice
Katara finally learnt to let go and ask for help and fall in love
Zuto well he was practically the main character and it hurts that all he went through he still doesn't get the girl.

They both love each but YOU keep them apart because Anag needs to be babied
It would be better if Anag had killed Ozai and the sequel would be about life after the war to build up Anag as a character.

Then have Katara go home and rebuild.

You are good writers but your characters just suddenly did a 180 and forgot about their character development.

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and technically sokka killed combustion man

the gaang have killed even without realizing. they blew up the side of a mountain covered in tanks, pushed people in armor into polar ice water, the entire north pole incident... it's something thats always bothered me about the show. they don't think about consequences

i keep having to remind myself she's a traumatized 14 year old. katara can be insufferable at times

“Zuko took lashes for me but you, Aang, you’re okay with me having emotions for him, so you’re the one.”

What an inspiring message to conclude your story on.

Me decepciono mucho que Katara se decidiera por Aang y no por Zuko. No me gustó el final. Fue muy triste eso.

Pride... something that every sapient being cherished

Is Zuko a teenager?
It seems he is more like a man to endure 15 slashes

Aaahhhh. I binge read this story and wowww. I feel so choked up at this ending. It's so good, I have loved reading this but gahhh so bitterseeet

I love your style of writing and how well your wrote the characters and their interactions in this story. However, since you labeled this a zutara story and nothing else, the ending of kataang was CRUSHINGLY disappointing. im not sure why you felt the need to stick to the canon ending with Katara gling back to Aang, because it didnt make any sense tk me with how you were building their characters and relationships throughout the story. If you had intended on thus ending from the beginning then you need to properly label your story, otherwise you are setting up every reader for major dissappointment. If I had known that was how it ended, i wouldnt have read it, to be honest. I lived the rest of the story and your writing, maybe if you return to fanfiction writing y ou could edit the ending to make your k
label of zutara accurate, and perhaps have the kataang part as extra chapters as an alternate ending, because after reading such a long story looking forward to a zutara ending it was such a let down and was infuriating. I hope you take this review as constructive criticism.

I mean I was pretty much done with this by the end of the first chapter because of the awkward prose, but having read the reviews to see that you have Kataang as the endgame pairing, I'm glad I saved myself the bother of reading nearly 400K words.

Really clunky prose. Is English your second language?

Well I'm happy I skipped to the end. I was starting to get the idea that this wasn't gonna go the way you said in the summer and well it didn't. It's kind of douche to upset a summary that way and then not do it but you know. This sucks

Aang is an arogant,12 yo BOY,who thimks he can always rely on some magical spirit to save a life that shouldn't be saved,and I don't know how on earth can a girl like Katara CHOOSE between him and Zuko.I mean Zuko threw himself at every life-death situation to save that girl,in the end he was half dead,burnt,and she just threw herself at a boy and left the MAN she loves behind who was ready to sacrafice himself for chapter 43 you just had to spoil that this will end with Kataang and from there i had the this "feeling" that... .But i have one question...How in the name of seven hells of corelia can a boy won a girls hearth who is 2 years older than him,if Aang would have been 20 and Katara 22 that wouldn't be a problem bc the maturity but a 12 old compared to a 14 old is a huge gap in my opinion,and i know from here that i will get hateful comments for this but I DO NOT CARE:The man needs to be older or same age for a relationship to work.