Reviews for Destiny
stargazerin chapter 10 . 11/21/2008
This is awesome! I had a great time reading it! Only one thing was confusing me all over the story: you tend to switch the point of time within your story without signaling that you did. But still, this is a very good piece of work!
CharmedSerenity3 chapter 10 . 11/6/2008
This was a very beautiful story...
Starling Sinclair chapter 10 . 9/16/2008
excellent rendition and exploration of Usagi and Mamoru's manga relationship. great job.
Lily Topaz chapter 10 . 9/15/2008
omg! too cute! update!
RoyalLovers1418 chapter 10 . 9/15/2008
AWESOME STORY! SAD TO SEE IT END!
InLoveWithABoy chapter 10 . 9/15/2008
yay!
Mg chapter 7 . 8/28/2008
I should say that I'm particularly referring to the last 3 chapters I believe. The previous ones were kinda okay...but then the dialogue seemed to slip off the map...
Mg chapter 8 . 8/28/2008
Your story has the potential to be good if it weren't for the fact that it is so passive. You have barely any dialogue and thats was sucks out the active interaction that your story could have had. It also takes away from the strength of the story. I'm not really feeling it so much. Anyway, just a note...
Unknown-Eth chapter 8 . 8/23/2008
oh... lovely!

simply lovely! bring on

the NXT chappy!
estelin chapter 8 . 8/22/2008
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more.
Melissa chapter 8 . 8/21/2008
Realy good! im addicted to it!

Are you going to leave it like that... or continue it?

(fingers crossed, mumbles 'please continue, please continue' hehe)

Melissa

xoxo
RoyalLovers1418 chapter 8 . 8/21/2008
OH HELL NO, HE CAN'T DIE ON ME TWICE! (READ ANOTHER STORY WHERE HE DIED EARLIER) PLZ UPDATE REALLY SOON!
silverm00nangel chapter 7 . 8/12/2008
hello...what happens next?

please update! I'm dying to know...great story!
Kelevandras chapter 7 . 6/23/2008
please update soon!
lfleurdelys chapter 7 . 6/21/2008
This is wonderful! I love the description of emotions and how close you've stayed to the manga! Keep up the great work! _
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