|Reviews for Dumpshock|
| the 85th writer chapter 27 . 8/30/2008
Guh! Cool :D I get why she hates Tony now. And yes, is Rhodes going t come in guns blazing along with Pepper to save Tony? Nice update.
| tamasit1 chapter 27 . 8/29/2008
Poor Kitten, to have gone through all that. Plus can she really hear Tony when he says he knew nothing about all this? I hope she does. They need each other. Thanks for so many quick updates.
| Mandy chapter 26 . 8/29/2008
I just wanted to tell you I am loving this story and was so happy to see it updated again. You worked "A Game of You" into the story brilliantly, I always loved Martin Tenbones. I am looking forward to the next chapter :)
| the85thwriter chapter 26 . 8/28/2008
'Not pretty' just about covers it. But how does Tony tie in with this? And also, I hope Pepper has some sort of plan that doesn't involve dunking all of Tony's money into Mitsuhama. I had to skim through the AG details, in the hope that I'll forget em by the time I get my hands on the book.
| tamasit1 chapter 26 . 8/28/2008
wow, poor Kitten. something like that could make anyone kill. then Tony with no arc reactor. dear god, they just can't win can they?
| anaticulapraecantrix chapter 25 . 8/28/2008
Hey as long as you keep updating, I don't care how long you take.
Although I do want to know Tony's plan. So please not as long of a wait.
| anaticulapraecantrix chapter 24 . 8/4/2008
Aww a heart to heart. :)
| tamasit1 chapter 24 . 8/4/2008
I liked both these new chapters. I liked seeing Pepper get angry and like you said, get a spine. I think she will be a force to be reckoned with once she is trained. I mean she already is in the business world and with Tony. Loved this chapter because I did like seeing a 'softer' side to Kitten. Also it was good to see that Tony has not given up on trying to get out. His mind is always working on escape.
| the 85th writer chapter 24 . 8/4/2008
Finally! This chapter kicked balls, so to speak. I love Pepper with a spine. In most of the fics it's Pepper-trailing-after-Tony and blah, but this... This was perfect. Thank you so much for non-wimpy Pepper. And kitten is beginning to get interesting with a more human side, beyond the cold,vicous assassin.
| tamasit1 chapter 22 . 7/18/2008
I really like the dynamic between Tony and Kitten. I am very interested to see if they can put their differences aside and help each other out. I am also looking forward to what Pepper and Rhodey are going to do.
| tamasit1 chapter 21 . 7/16/2008
I found this story and figured, what the hell, I would give it a shot. I don't know anything about Shadowrun (except what is going on in this story) and yet I am loving this. I think everything you are doing is just great. There is amazing action and thrills. I can't tell you how much I am looking forward to what is going to happen next.
| Sonnengott chapter 21 . 7/13/2008
Ah you've kept us waiting! And now two updates in a row!
And if that is the product of streamlining and polishing, keep doing it, please. Good writing, rhythm works, tension's going up...
And yeah, chunky salsa... I actually don't like the huge amounts of calculating that some parts of Shadowrun generate. I'm more a kind of a storytelling roleplayer and if you have to keep on rolling dice and adding numbers for a quarter hour for a single grenade it gets kinda weird. But: in the end when the shockwaves have bounced off the walls several times, chunky salsa is pretty much what you're left with.
| anaticulapraecantrix chapter 21 . 7/12/2008
I suck at chess too. I just move around the pieces without any sort of plan.
| the 85th writer chapter 8 . 7/11/2008
hello. just here for a re-read. Effing awesome is all I can say. Are we going to see an update anytime soon?
| anaticulapraecantrix chapter 19 . 7/1/2008
can't wait for more.