|Reviews for City|
| Netchka chapter 5 . 5/9
Even in danger Rodney and John will argue.
| Mary Craig chapter 5 . 7/23/2013
Fun tale :-) and aw, but Rodney's got a pet now too :cool: a replacement for his moggie.
Surely the city IA could be taught to be more useful though ? even if it was just a place of temporary sanctury for those in need; it does seem to be the ultimate baby sitter, if slightly manic on the control.
Thank you for writing and posting.
| dragoness simplicity chapter 5 . 5/6/2013
Absolutely brilliant plot. I love group adventures and yours was amazingly written.
I noticed in chapter 2 'They were in grassy patch'. I think the computer may have taken out 'a' when it uploaded or something. I've heard uploading stories sometimes does that, as well as smooshing some words together and double spacing. That kind of stuff. I just thought I'd point it out in case you hadn't seen it.
I love this story so much though. You are definitely one of my favourite authors and I can't wait to read more. -Smiley face-
| Hummingbird2 chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
Whoa, that was really something else! Wild, wacky, and one heck of a read, thank you very much.
| Aileil chapter 5 . 10/23/2012
I like 'Betty'! And thank you for having Rodney promise to visit the city to study! :) I really liked this story!
| Aileil chapter 4 . 10/23/2012
Attack of the cleaning crew!
| Aileil chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
Ah the dangers of lawn maintenance... :)
| RavenWeavesTales chapter 5 . 7/14/2012
Great story! *iz a proud whumper* Ya whumped the team with a slightly misguided,possibly psychotic City. Yay! hehe *smirks* I snickered at the City's commands to the rebelling robots...those were freaking hysterical. lol I liked how McKay gave the City a sense of hope when he offered to come and study it from time to time. Cool story. Well done. Cheers! }:O
| Shadow Chaser chapter 5 . 9/28/2010
I need more of cute little 014 Robot. NEED MORE you hear?
| hajimebassaidai chapter 5 . 7/19/2010
Loved the original idea and the Misery-style city. Very, very creepy!
The team bickering was great fun and Ronon after a new coat was just brilliant!
Btw, I want an 014 of my very own as well! Adored how Rodney ended up adopting himself a skutter!
| Azolean chapter 5 . 10/14/2009
Please tell me you're planning a follow-up for this one. I loved this story. It was a great idea. But it leaves me wondering, you know?
I agree that a follow-up with McKay and Betty would be interesting. But what about the poor City? It's not its fault it was programmed that way. I know, it sounds pathetic, but I was rooting for the City by the end of it. lol
Yeah, they need to go back for a visit sometime. The possibilities here are so, so wide open.
Thank you so much for the time and effort you put into the creation of this fic. I'm looking forward to finding a follow-up and I continue on through your newer stuff.
| Lilimayhem chapter 5 . 6/2/2009
Good one. I almost want a sequel with Betty and Rodney!
| Whirlwind421 chapter 5 . 4/22/2009
Awesome story! I love little Betty/O14! And Ronon got his blaster back! There is peace in the world! Yay!
| Jinxauthor Mel chapter 5 . 3/20/2009
Getting out of trouble by causing *more* trouble for whoever or whatever put them *into* trouble, seems to have become the modus operandi for SG teams in any galaxy, but starting a full out revolution has to be a new one for Rodney. Quite fun to read, though something like that is actually more Sheppard's style. .~
When Teyla heard Rodney and John 'squabbling' at the end, I could so see Rodney putting on a puppy dog look and going, "Can I keep it?" So, are all the even numbered bots 'female'? I guess that would explain the kind of tasks City had ascribed to them, and therefore why they hated their superior more than the others. *g* I get the feeling Betty will fit right in with Atlantis.
Oh, why did it have to be a 'B' name? Or were those just natural alliterations because he started off with 'Buster'?
| Blueninja33 chapter 5 . 12/9/2008
Hooray for Betty!