| Reviews for City |
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   Silverthreads chapter 1 . 5/20/2008 Did you start this somewhere else? I love reading your work! |
| MaggieL80 chapter 1 . 5/20/2008 My day just got better. Another NotTasha fic. Team adventure, deserted ancient technology, team seperated, and apparently in danger. Dave...Dave...what are you doing Dave? |
| o submit a si chapter 1 . 5/20/2008 ul to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding |