Reviews for Strange Things Happen in Libraries with Dr Pepper
bob chapter 1 . 5/16
I am laughing and earning stares from my coworkers. Brilliant start.
SortingHat chapter 1 . 4/25
It's really sad that bad fanfics like this get all the attention while good ones that go thru proof reading and beta testing with a lot of hard work poured into it get ignored with only a few reviews though at leas those reviews are usually higher quality by more serious readers who know about professional writing techniques.
percyjacksonfan28 chapter 24 . 4/12
regina spektor will forever remain my favourite singer
TheBigOne chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
If they had the mortar canon then they could take the castle however no matter what the thing that ruined the plans was Caspian dealing with his father instead of keeping his focus on the task which was to free the professor.
TheBigOne chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
"What do you call girls in treetops?" Edmund chuckled. "Law suits waiting to happen!"

Welcome to Lawsuit land where the silliest thing can get you sued! Oh wait that sounds like Amerika! The USSA United Soviet States of Amerika!
TheBigOne chapter 3 . 6/30/2014
If they were smart they would make some sort of perimeter like the police do to corral suspects then flush the knights out but with all the squawking the knights have made clean their getaway with all da loot!
TheBigOne chapter 2 . 6/30/2014
At least this story isn't filled with swearing so I give bonus points for that and this chapter has a bit more flesh to it
TheBigOne chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Gawd this is awful!
Angelic Fluffle chapter 8 . 6/8/2014
I'm sorry if you've already seen this kind of review, but I think you have misunderstood the definition of Mary-Sue. A Mary-Sue is a derogatory term for a "perfect" character who shallowly written and lacks depth. It has nothing to do with pairing her to a canon character. I'm sorry, but I have had that term used on me before, and I dislike it being used the way you are using it. I'm pretty sure you didn't intend it to be negative, but I have had it used on my stories, and it can be really hurtful when directed at someone. Even if their character is not well-written, it's rude to directly call them a Mary-Sue.
I have no problem woth you keeping the story without a pairing. I would just prefer it if you used a different word to describe it.
booklover100 chapter 18 . 1/24/2014
I read your story a while a go and I'm reading it again I cried the first time when I read that Shade was dead and I cried now
DJ chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
I LOVE IT i laughed the whole way through
AryanaVara chapter 24 . 7/25/2013
Hi. So I guess, maybe, I should have commented sooner. But when I story is completed, I just can't stop reading. I have to say, this is a brilliant story. Never laughed so hard at a ff, loved it all. Except when Shade died... I cried at that bit... '
But it was amazing!
FattySkeleton chapter 25 . 5/3/2013
you really need to put the "COMPLETED" status on this.
MagicalJoy chapter 25 . 4/29/2013
I'm so glad you updated! I've been waiting forever for a chapter to be added to this story! Thank you, and please continue!
GoTeamSkipper chapter 24 . 1/9/2013
OH MY GOSH I FREAKIN LOVED THIS STORY! It was just so hilarious, so funny! I'm glad I wasn't drinking any Dr. Pepper while reason parts of this (particularly the first and ball chapters) otherwise it would have been coming out of my nose and sprayed across the room from laughter!
I know this is an "old fic" from 2008/2009 (it's obviously 2013 now) and I feel as if I'm almost reading a diary of someone who lived a century ago in te comments. I know I'm not tho :P
Pip was just so funny, and slightly reminded me of myself. I'm 5'2 (a good 1 1/2 inches taller than her) and tho I'm not THAT random I tend to be very random in my head, and I am clumsy. Heh heh.
Gosh I'm so glad you and Peter came out friends (too cute at the ball) and you and Ed were just ADORIBLE in a friend way 3 Lucy was a dear, Susan actually turned out well, and POOR SHADE! I will be keeping an eye out for him :)
I laughed really hard at so many parts, but one comes to mind when she killed someone and Peter was standing there open mouthed. LOL!
Your real life stories were hilarious, I couldn't breathe at the back pack story and the last true story I was laughing too. I would totally believe my friend if they told me that tho... Heh heh. I know how you feel, once you write it you feel like it happened!
I'm a little confused as to what a Mary-Sue is tho, is a character a Mary Sue if she is just paired with one of the boys? I guess I don't mind reading some sues then :)
Wow, long review for an awesome story!
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