Reviews for Prevention
HAZMOT chapter 12 . 8/27/2011
You would think that Ares would give it a rest about killing Xena and Hercules family. But I guess if he can't have Xena, no one can. With the twins missing and being forcebably trained by Ares. Both Hercules and Xena are not going to rest until they have their children back. And it's going to be Tartarus to pay once Xena finds them. :D
HAZMOT chapter 11 . 9/20/2010
It's about time Strife learned his lesson messing with Xena and Hercules family. That was quite a nasty ending for him and well deserved. Xena can be quite creative in the torture arena and Ares would be proud, if he wasn't locked up forever. I figuire Strife will be thing a lot about ever messing with Xena again. It makes me shiver just to think he will be drowned, eaten alive for all eternity. Serves him right. Xena and Hercules will have to measure their relationship again, when it comes to their family. They had a lot to deal with, especially with their children and I think the guilt of not protecting them permates them both. Let's just hope that there are lessons learned all around. :D
HAZMOT chapter 10 . 2/21/2009
You know I love it when Xena fights Ares, but to put Eve, Hercules and Aphrodite against him, well that was worth the wait. It would be to easy for Ares to be pulled into the cave and not have something else up his sleeve. And of course who better than Stifle or Strife to get to the kids to get to Xena and Hercules. Michelle played it smart waiting for her chance to call her mother. But I hope Michelle got away. But of course there would be no good drama hanger to bite our nails would it. hehehe
HAZMOT chapter 9 . 10/8/2008
I love the fact that Xena and Hercules are so playful and romantic. He knows Xena and know she like to have her way, but it doesn't seem to bother him. Xena has a full blown family and about to adopt more children. It seems she's having that second chance and being an Aunt to Kiyoshi. Ares definitely wants to make Xena's life miserable, even though she has certain powers to protect her family. Michelle is turning out to be quite the athlete, and her concern on who her brother rather be, still weighs on her. I'm sure as the times change she will embrace what she is and her brother will to. He's proud to be black and wants Michelle to recognize where she came from. But, it seems that Xena has pulled off showing Michelle, she has the choice and has to live with her decision. Eve is turned out nice as a Doctor and I'm sure down the road she will be in big demand. But now Hercules and Xena must evade Ares as much as they can and protect their family. :D
HAZMOT chapter 8 . 9/8/2008
Ha, Xena is back and it took her expensive lipstick to bring her back. hehehe Poor Hercules, he's outnumbered by all the women to his wife and daughters. He has no clue what he's up against. Now they're going to have Aphrodite's son to raise, which may be beneficial to Hercules, amongst all those women. :D
HAZMOT chapter 7 . 9/6/2008
Oh, this was way too funny. Hercules being the prude, knowing how Xena loves to make love. Especially both of them not expecting company and and walking around in the buff. Eve certainly had some entertaining comments as well as Hercules coming clean in playing the prude. Ever bit as funny when Michele returned home with a friend and the guest parents ran for the hills to have their own weekend. Well, now Hercules has to contend with shopping with his daughter and missing out on that wonderful weekend with Xena. hehehehe :D
ameridess chapter 7 . 9/6/2008
Love it! It's about time those two got some. Thank goodness Herc was only pretending to be so prude. They have a lot of ground to make up for waiting that long. It was a good idea to have Xena take off and leave the girls with him. It's his turn to take care of them too.
HAZMOT chapter 6 . 9/4/2008
I kind of thought Michele would be jealous of Eve, especially knowing that Eve was Xena's first. I'm glad she warmed up to idea of having an older sister and teasing Xena. I always did love Aphoridite and her loving interference in their lives. Ares definitely wanted to make his presense known in America, but now that their safe back in England, it may be a challenge to get to Xena. :D
ameridess chapter 6 . 9/2/2008
I'm glad that Eve and Michelle worked things out. Sisters always have to have something to fight about. It was clever to have Aphrodite be a fashion designer, plus all of her children as well. It fits her perfectly. Great job including all of the designers and their fashions. You've really done your homework. A
HAZMOT chapter 5 . 8/31/2008
Well now that Ares is lose somewhere, what is he planning next. Xena beleives England is the safest place for her family and I wonder why? Michele is intrigued about her parents life and it seems that Xena and Hercules are becoming great parents. Now they have to be on guard against Ares, but will they eventually all have to deal with him soon? It seems Xena is anxious to have Michele meet Eve, and it's still a mystery how Eve is still alive. So on with the story. :D
ameridess chapter 5 . 8/30/2008
I like how you explained the story after the show ended. It connects everything together. Ares is such a pain. He never stops. It's pretty low of him to stoop to killing the family dog.
HAZMOT chapter 4 . 8/30/2008
It seems Mr and Mrs Kent both need manners in hospitality and cultural differences. It seems they have their own family problems instead of worryingy about Michele and her family. It seems that Xena and Hercules have their minds made up in showing Michele another side of the world. I think it's great that Xena continued to let Michele decide who she is and still stay in touch with her brother. :D
ameridess chapter 4 . 8/28/2008
Love the chapter. Sounds like herc and xena have some pent up tension. I liked how Xena reacted with Percy. She has that effect on everyone. Good job.
HAZMOT chapter 3 . 8/24/2008
I'm intrigued how you came of with this premise. Not just in keeping Ares from waking but the family issues of having a mixed child and how Hercules and Xena deal with the problems of a child lost or not knowing who or what she is. I think you are doing a great job going back and forth on how Michele is confused at her appearance and how other people relate to her on race alone. Not many stories address this unique culture confusion and I think you're doing a excellent job of Xena and Herucules allowing Michele to figuiure out her own way. :D
ameridess chapter 2 . 8/17/2008
Xena as June Cleaver is amazing! Love this story.
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