Reviews for When Darkness Turns to Light
LdyJulanna chapter 1 . 10/10
This is an incredible fic. I thoroughly enjoyed it. However, I really really wished there was like an envelope or something where we get to see Jacob and Bella's reunion with Bella. A vampire or even Bella and the Cullens. Especially Edward. I would like to see Bella vampire Bella maybe use some skills. The major may have taught her on Edward. I could see it now she's at the Cullen visiting and he comes in and starts running his mouth on Jasper because we know Bella wouldn't actually let somebody talking about her get her upset. But if somebody was to talk about Jasper bringing up his past in a bad light trying to belittle Jasper. I could see Bella turning to Esme in being something like "sorry will pay for the repairs." And Esme turning to her. "For what dear?" As Edward goes flying through the French door or the window or whatever out into the yard. LOL where Bella's teaches Edward exactly how much she Jasper let him get away with all in the name of fitting in with the family and keeping Alice happy. :-)
Babysis64 chapter 50 . 7/29
wow so Bella got a promise ring, I sure hope she marries Jasper and be happy with her life right.
Lemonmelons chapter 33 . 6/3
I'll quit reading it now.
I could deal with all the sex being a guys wet dream and completely male centred but this is just too much. Bella is almost raped and instead of helping, comforting, making sure she is ok, using hours fucking money to prosecute the perpetrator Jasper is letting for her comfort him. This is so wrong.
It's the same shit as with Edward again and it is normalising rape culture in a way I really don't want my fiction to do.
Lemonmelons chapter 24 . 6/1
What why would she berate herself (as a slut, skiing something bad and feeling guilty) for dancing with Logan? There's nothing wrong with being turned on.

Female sexuality is not something to be ashamed of.
Bookwormkat1 chapter 52 . 4/29
definitely a favourite. I would love to see just one more chapter, showing everything from aro's reaction, to Jacob still being her friend, and meeting up with the other Cullens.
that k you for writing.
Guest chapter 34 . 10/18/2019
But aren't Steven going to rape someone else and shouldn't they do something like report this guy to the police?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2019
Dairy is pure infection. Yuck
NegansGirl2020 chapter 7 . 5/11/2019
Sorry but that whole Jacob conversation was more about him controlling her and keeping things from her not about protecting her or being her friend
anytito chapter 52 . 4/27/2019
Que hermosa historia, me encantó como se enamoraron poco a poco, me gusto que no hubo mucho drama, todo fue muy romántico. De mis historias favoritas de Jazper y Bella. Te felicito. Ojalá escribieras más.
suziq968 chapter 52 . 3/31/2019
What a ride! This was great. I'm glad to see the follow up though, hope you answer some whatever happened to questions.
suziq968 chapter 45 . 3/31/2019
SPOILERS! You're killing me here. First we're on this hilariously funny ride of double entendres and classic Bella clumsy, then we get a little drama with Jacob being upset and Needy being a perv. I thought it was possible that Victoria had killed Charlie and Renee and was just really sneaky and couldn't get past the pack. To find out that she was responsible, the pack knew and hid it and then were stupid enough to call off the guard, oh my GOSH! Way to stress a reader out, the twist with Victoria's lies was great though. I'm pretty sure you caused me to clench, like, EVERYTHING.
momma2fan chapter 52 . 3/21/2019
Wonderful! I loved it!
Raven J. Haile chapter 52 . 2/20/2019
This was absolutely beautiful. God's I wish there was more, or even a sequel. Also the ring is simply lovely. :3
dandelion1112 chapter 1 . 2/14/2019
Awesome story! Thank you so much for it!
zpower21 chapter 26 . 1/11/2019
It’s. Lear that jake is a controlling and manipulative jerk. He has a wolf there watching her. We got that from nearly the beginning. Jake is a sick individual praying on a broken girl. He acts like he is protecting a family member, but his methods far outreach what is right. Bella needs to wake up and see this for what it is.

~Z~
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