im so glad bella finally got her head out of her ass and told jacob how it is

hmm... maybe logan isnt the shifter. its either him or steve. its obviously one of them.

who wears a halter top to a dinner date? especially if you dont want the guy to be interested.. seems like shes for the streets to me

the nerve of her! she got so mad at jasper studying with someone but still agrees to andate with logan. she seems to like finding excuses to string guys along to be honest. she clearly knows she has feelings for jasper and still parades logan around and strings him along. not to mention, it glaringly obvious that logan is probably a shifter.

bella has some nerve being mad about sandy. they were studying and she acted like colossal scumbag. its fine for her to throw logan in his face and hurt jasper so jacobs delicate feelings wont be hurt because she isnt following his orders. shes 22 and her father is dead. jacob isnt actually on charge of her life. she meeds to sort her shit out.

That kid would be getting the fuck out of my house! Bella needs a damn backbone! There's no way in hell I would answer to someone younger than myself. I don't give a flyin' monkey fart what he's done to help her. He has no right to speak to her the way he does.

I would call this a pleasant roller coaster ride. A bit mello-dramatic at times, but there's nothing wrong with that. Definitely worth the read! Thanks.

Beautiful story. This is one of the most in-character Twilight fan fictions I have ever read. You have done a wonderful job developing Bella into something that she could have been, and really makes me wistful-I think your Bella became my cannon Bella. I quite liked the depths that you gave to both Jasper and Alice, and what a wonderful and compassionate being Alice turned out to be. This story was truly a pleasure to read from beginning to end, and I look forward to enjoying this story again and again.

BEAUTIFUL!

good read loved it

Great story! Thanks for writing and sharing.

NO! JUST HELL NO! Jake is a KID speaking to an adult like that. Baseball bat...meet his face!

Bella needs to put that BOY Jacob in his place. She's older than him. I would be damned, if someone younger than me would speak to me the way Jake speaks to her. A hand may not work on his hard head, but a damn baseball bat would. Just sayin'.

Bella and Jasper, both need to get out of their damn heads.

Love this!