Reviews for Secret Heart
keaneplay chapter 11 . 12/7/2009
It would seem jealousy rules above stubboness. Flying lessons should be fun though.
keaneplay chapter 10 . 12/7/2009
Gohan is so blind! I know that he's got a pure heart and all but surely even he should have relised that Videl is jealous...
keaneplay chapter 9 . 12/7/2009
You went for the dream thing then - shame Gohan didn't hear the last part...
keaneplay chapter 8 . 12/7/2009
You've got to love Goten's innocence "Am I a Prince too?" - he's going to have fun with Trunks later :D
keaneplay chapter 7 . 12/7/2009
You recreated the scene from the anime but changed it to better suit your Fic - I can only wish that I was as good a writer as you...
keaneplay chapter 6 . 12/7/2009
It's really cute when they keep blushing all the time... It's good to see that you are still going to do the flying lessons :)
keaneplay chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
Now that's an interesting way of finding out whether Gohan is the Great Saiyaman! I really am enjoying this Fic - it's the first Gohan/Videl one that I've ever read...
keaneplay chapter 4 . 12/7/2009
Chi Chi seemed to take the idea of Gohan having a girl stay over at his house pretty well - I'm surprised...
keaneplay chapter 3 . 12/7/2009
You've got to fear for Videl's well being if she's going to fight with Gohan...
keaneplay chapter 2 . 12/7/2009
Very cute, I like how you got Videl's best friend to grill her with questions about Gohan - her discomfort was plain to see!
keaneplay chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
Nice first chapter, looking forward to reading some of the newer chapters :)
S.Spooky chapter 19 . 12/6/2009
Everyone gives Piccolo a hard time for being green but you gotta admit he adds color to this rag tag bunch of saiyans. You have to update more often; I want to see how everyone reacts to Videl knowing she's Hercule's daughter.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 19 . 12/6/2009
But the current world champion is…" Krillin abruptly interrupted himself. Then he widened his eyes, realizing who the girl's father was.

"Your father is Mister Satan?"

Did the wedding bells stop ringing in the other Z-fighters ears?

Great work.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 18 . 12/6/2009
Great work.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 17 . 12/6/2009
Great work. Poor Chi-chi drives like a Maniac.
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