Reviews for Secret Heart
Itachi's apprentice chapter 16 . 12/6/2009
"You're gorgeous, Videl," He said simply.

She looked away again, and moved away from him, gaining the upper hand over her sudden urge to kiss him.

"W-Well, okay. I'll take it."

Aww. So cute.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 15 . 12/6/2009
Great work.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 14 . 12/6/2009
Great work. The ending was really cute.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 13 . 12/6/2009
But I warn you, Satan, if you ever raise your hand on Videl again, I will kill you. Did I make myself clear?"

"I won't hesitate to kill anyone who will dare to hurt you."

Those were my Fav. Lines. Great work.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 12 . 12/6/2009
Great work.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 11 . 12/6/2009
Math Lessons, I hate Math. Great work.
ShadowMario3 chapter 19 . 12/6/2009
Haha, nice chapter. Would be epic to see everyone, or at least Vegeta, to make fun of Mr. Satan. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ananymous chapter 19 . 12/6/2009
Good chapter. Keep it up
PhoenixRe chapter 19 . 12/6/2009
Oh, thing are starting to heat up... and another cliffy.

Amazing story so far. Can't wait to see the rest of it...

On another note, on my second read I noticed some minor spelling mistakes here and there (either spelling or correct words but wrong ones, they are close the correct ones)
PhoenixRe chapter 14 . 12/6/2009
I was rereading this (yes you should be flattered, i was reading it for a second time) and I was thinking that the revelation about the Cell games was at the 14th chapter as well as some acceptance as friend (even though we all know what's really going on) but I realized that even though it was 14 chapters it felt more like 4. It is a really easy read and that is a plus for me. It's proof that the writing is enjoyable and easy.

Aaron Leach chapter 19 . 12/6/2009
Awesome chapter.
vegeta997 chapter 19 . 12/6/2009
Very interesting... I like it. Please update soon!
PhoenixRe chapter 18 . 12/2/2009
Wow, it's great so far. Now I will patiently wait for the rest...
Itachi's apprentice chapter 10 . 12/2/2009
Great work. Poor Gohan.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 9 . 12/1/2009
Great work. I curse my weakness I should have leave for th University half an hour ago, but this story was way too good. See ya later.
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