|Reviews for Wind Beneath My Wings|
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/18
Thankyou. DottyWho. 18.02.2014.
| HeartWing3113 chapter 21 . 12/26/2012
So..This review is practically 4 years late )) Anyway I think you are brilliant! Your grammar is amazing and the plot of the story's fantastic! The characters are perfectly portrayed in my opinion and also my eyes were glued to reading this. There's a song called Wind Beneath My Wings (which caught my attention) and I loved that song :) anyway so as I've said before, this is amazing, you are amazing and a genius too
| TeBlacks chapter 21 . 2/11/2012
I think you captured the relationship between Jack and Ianto beautifully in this. Good job.
Keep writing, you're really good at it.
| Lady Emma Wentworth chapter 21 . 11/4/2010
This is brilliant - just read you in one go - great story line, amazing characters - such believable personalities - I really, really enjoyed the entire story - so very sorry Lucy had to die - just one more soul on Jack's eternal conscience, even if he's never the one at fault, he still feels each and every one of them. I also really liked the very end, where the team vows to help Jack in remembering the lost, liked that part a lot. Well, off to read more of your amazing, truly attention-holding works.
| Francine S chapter 21 . 12/29/2009
omg, great story, loved the detail, especially the chemistry (not that i understand any of it anymore), great to have one of jacks exs make an appearance, really enjoyed it
| Janiqua chapter 9 . 7/13/2008
“Oh don’t worry about that. Even if she does kill him he’ll just refuse to speak to her for a while.”
Loved that line. Go Owen!
| Janiqua chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Sorry, I know this is already a completed fic and all, but I have to point out that when different people speak, you MUST start new paragraphs. As far as I can tell, you've got a really good writing style, so you shouldn't be making such an adolescent mistake. You're better than that.
Anyway, other than that, it's good. Interesting take on that scene from Fragments. Can't wait to read more.
| Trainee Hero chapter 21 . 7/8/2008
Broke my heart.
| LadyAnalyn chapter 21 . 7/6/2008
Nice ending. We're gonna need some more Jack and Ianto action in the future though ;) TTFN
| hotflower901 chapter 21 . 7/5/2008
I enjoyed your tale. I look forward to the next.
| doctor-who-fangirl chapter 21 . 7/5/2008
It was beautiful. Thank you very much for this story,, I loved it.
| hotflower901 chapter 20 . 6/30/2008
Sad for David. Sad for Torchwood
| LadyAnalyn chapter 20 . 6/30/2008
it still might be an interesting fic, you'd just have to sort out the Mary-Sue issue. You could always make it into a spoof. Anyway, I look forward to the conclusion of this fic. TTFN
| Literary Ditch chapter 20 . 6/30/2008
Review of whole story:
Sorry for blathering at you through that, yeah...
However, despite the odds, I'm still pulling the tenterhooks out of the edge of my seat, pardon the hybridation of metahors. I disagree about the Mary Sue production comment, little though I understand the meaning of "Mary Sue": speaking as the loathesome, nagging, science nerd come nemesis of a brother, this is better than a lot of things that do get printed.
The BBC website has a 'phone number on; use it.
| hotflower901 chapter 19 . 6/24/2008
poor lucy and david. Death by Torchwood